Great story! Although there are a little grammar problems found throughout, I thought it was a very cute, and heartwarming story.

VERY glad to know I'm not the only one who loves the Goemon franchise!

Not a bad story. I'm glad someone else out there likes this game. I liked the story, hope to see more.

That kind of sucked! :(

This is the best Mystical Ninja fic I've ever read

Actually, it's the only one. But it was really cute, and funny at the same time! Good job!

wow this was cute keep going keep going - your good at this ya know

I am glad im not the only person in the world other than japan that knows about Goemon n friends did u know their is even Yu-Gi-Oh cards about them