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Dragonlady 2005-03-23 ch 7, anon.	abuseOh no. Not another cliffhanger. Please update! puppy dog eyes What's making the growling noises? A giant Fenrir? (Okay, random GS1 monster...) Or something completely new? I can't wait for the next chapter!
Caster of Chaos 2005-02-22 ch 7,	abuseSomehow, I DOUBT that Jenna and Mia would become distracted that easily by a red flying thing that might happen to look like a dog. XD Wow, has it really been three months since I reviewed anything? Yeesh. Anyway, great job again, and (as always) nice cliffhanger. The only thing you need to work on is your speed. Just kidding.
A prototypical poet 2004-12-05 ch 1, anon.	abuseI read 9 chapters of "Light's Shadow" and still I have no idea what is going on half of the time...(quite obvious, I don't play this video game) About this chapter, I thought one part was funny, but I don't remember which one. I have an idea...why don't you just kill everyone in that group!
Jupiter Sprite 2004-10-25 ch 6,	abuse::winces:: Uh-oh... here comes the angry mob now... - the ground begins to shake, and a stampeding crowd of enraged readers is seen rapidly approaching, waving OBHL flags - Well, while we're all still alive... to the review! I just read this whole thing in one go... I liked it! The idea of the pegasus egg was very clever (and that conversation where you intentionally kept us in the dark as to what it was was very irritating! ^^). I love the humor, too - in the muse section as well as the actual story. - The bridge hand-thing was a nice idea. The plot is developing nicely, although I'm rather surprised that the windies recuperated from being frozen so fast... and with no lingering symptoms, at that... - And wolves of a tundra... on a mountain. ^_^ - Keep it up! (and keep that brick around!)
Jupiter Sprite 2004-10-25 ch 2,	abuseI'm not done reading yet, but I had to review because... - "I knew a cliffhanger like this once. Her name was Sue." - ::bursts out laughing:: That was hysterical!! ahem Okay, I'm done now, I'll go read the rest and stop wasting your time...
Midnight C 2004-10-20 ch 6,	abuseActually, Icarus died from drowning. He had wings made of feathers and wax, but he flew up too close to the sun and the wax melted, so he plummeted into the sea. Gotta love those Greek myths about listening to your older, wiser parents. ^_- As for the chapter...your days are definitely numbered now. First you kill Isaac, then you torture Mia in various ways, and now you're trying to kill off PICARD!?!?! Why don't you just drop everyone else off the cliffside while you're at it?! Obligatory OBHL rant: NOT PICARD! NOT PICARD!! [Cries]
Taiga 2004-10-18 ch 6,	abuseWow! You chose my name...does the happy dance On another note... Ouch... first Isaac, now Picard... this is going to cost you... the fans are going to kill you. Evey: But Sean dies Oh he doesn't count... Evey: And Picard isn't dead yet... Details... details...
Arowyn 2004-10-16 ch 6,	abuseYou...are...evil... Very...very...evil... You better update soon, and Picard better be alive and unhurt...or else...GR! grabs a sword and leaves
Caster of Chaos 2004-10-16 ch 6,	abuseClifford... Hmm... Out of curiosity, is the pegasus (Not Peggy, XD) extremely large and red? Curse (and praise) your infernal wonderful cliffhangers. Did that make any sense?
Midnight C 2004-10-11 ch 5,	abuseWait...how can a pegasus hatch from an egg? Aren't they ~mammals?~ Crystal: Logic doesn't have to apply to mythical creatures. Look at we Djinn! ...It's scary when something you say makes sense. Crystal: Thanks! ^^ Meanwhile, Ivan and the others are probably going to freeze to death (or be mauled by wild animals) and you're worried about what to call this thing? That's just peachy! [Glare] Crystal: I could go beat him up again if you give me the proper sugar boost... Tempting. I'll save it for later. ^_- Now names...names...I'm not good with names. ^^; Maybe something mythological would be fitting, like Icarus or Apollo. Crystal: Or you could name it Crystal! -_-+ [Sigh]
Taiga 2004-10-10 ch 5,	abuseHehe, loved that "supper" comment. Got to love dark humor (or am I the only one who think this is humor?) I have a name, how about "Cliff"? I mean, look at all those cliffhangers...
Caster of Chaos 2004-10-08 ch 5,	abuseIt is I, your faithful reviewer! Personally, I think Shalex would be a GREAT name for the Pegasus (Note sarcasm). Surprisingly, this isn't (in my opinion) as much of a cliffhanger as some others you've done. By the way, I love Felix's "lukewarm or polar cold?
Caster of Chaos 2004-10-05 ch 4,	abuseArgh! Even though I'm the first member of the Omniflyer School of Cliffhangers-After-Almost-Every-Chapter, I'm still frustrated. Do you enjoy this? Anyway, (As usual) great chapter! A mysterious stone... A missing bridge... A drunk dude... Ooh. What's with the stone? -Caster of Chaos, confuddled once again.
Taiga 2004-10-04 ch 4,	abuseThis is going from bad to worse for them... I will be mean here. Hahahahaha! Ok, mean part over. Can't wait to see what happends next.
Midnight C 2004-10-03 ch 4,	abuse[Hits head against desk] My urge to kill you is rising...rapidly. There are so many "ARGH!" moments in this chapter. Figures that Mia lookalike would end up causing problems in some way. And now the others have thrown away THE STONE. You haven't told us why it's important yet, but we know it is...and now they've thrown it away! And if Ivan and Sheba had caught up to them instead of going the wrong way, the others would know why the stone is important and wouldn't have left it! ARGH!! You do realize that more "close calls" like these are going to shorten you life just as quickly as cliffhangers, right? [Resumes hitting head against desk]

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