Really great! The characterization is absolutly excellent. It's really funny too.

like the story very much
but it could do with a few more chappys
i wish i was like her you discribed her charater really well

Your "gorgeous interpretation" of Yuffie was great; just pure Yuffie. You captured the bare essence of her - the pride, and at the same time, a little shame of Wutai, an uncontrollable urge to steal Materia (The word for "having a penchant for stealing" has just slipped my mind. Oh well.), and pissing off the other AVALANCHE members with her antics and her amazingly large but hilarious ego. Showed the light and darker sides of Yuffie perfectly - and in a character interpretation-type one-shot such as this, there's no higher praise.

"Yuffie Kisa-fucking-ragi!"
That was great! This was a funny story, plus I liked the use of 'gawd'. Good one shot.

Most stories don't even glance at Barret, so I was extremely happy to see him, and first thing at that. And I love his twist on her last name. This made me laugh until my face was red.

Cool! I like it. This made me laugh more than once, so, good job.