This was truly one of the best fanfictions I have ever read. Kyo's innocent feelings about Kagura's eyes were expertly described. I'm in love with the Kagura x Kyo pairing as well, and it was refreshing to see this oh so neglected pair so beautifully depicted. Excellent job.

That was great! I love KyouxKagura too!

THIS WAS SO GOOD! and i'm usually a kyo/tohru fan, but this was so good! I loved it so much! make it longer please? Pretty pretty please please? excellentness, utter excellentness!

I'm a humongous kyo./kagura fan too! and your fic was just so sweet and touching! its nice to read a fic where kyo is an utter ** to kagura and explores his feelings for her. XD it was great! keep up the good work ne?> and i hope u write more KxK!

I really liked your story so much so I have added it to the Collection of Kyou/Kagura stories community on Maybe that will get you more readers to this wonder story. ^_^ You're a wonderful writer.

Yay Kyou+Kagura fans unite! This totally my fav. couple, but you don't see too much about it... Wah... will you please write a sequel? Pretty Please? (and make it a little longer ne?) But not an epic!

Aw, so sentimental and sweet. ^^ (I know sentimental could be perceived as an insult, but it seems like the best word and I really liked this fic!) The language was beautiful, and I loved how you stretched out the moment like that. I'm supposed to be doing homework right now so I cant go read all your other stuff like I want to, but that'll happen soon, dontcha worry!

Yea! Shampoo so happy! Me likie Kagura and Kyo lotz! Although shampoo like Yuki and Tohru, Shampoo happy still-still! ^_^ *Meow*

Oh . . .that was so sweet! I'm a big Kyou/Kagura fan, but also a fan of the characters for themselves, not just as a pairing. I have to say, that was perhaps my favorite look into Kyou's mind concerning Kagura. There have been quite a few fics that go the other way around, but not so many this way. I really liked that you added Kyou's thoughts on Kagura when they were little. I really enjoyed it; I'm smiling right now.
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I run Neko_Ino, a K/K fanworks site. Would you be interested in me hosting this fic there? I'd certainly love to have it. You can reach me through my bio. Again, great job!