Sasuke is so OOC...

D*mn... and here I was hoping he'd do something like "Good morning..." wait till she takes a drink of coffee "kaa-san" and laugh as she chokes

Jeeze... poor girl
He figures it out and she runs for the hills

kudos on the subtle gore intro,i dubbest thee badass 1st chapter

Oh my god this made me wan t to cry so much. I had an experience like that once back in my freshmen year of high school it wasn't on purpose but its feels so downright horrible.
I'm the cross country team on Wensdays we have a later practice because its the after extra help day (stupid math). I was late so I got to the area where we stretch and the entire team had left for the run without me. So I had to sit there and wait for them to get back because I didn't what we were running that day so I just sat there and then to make my day worse it started to rain I just glad it only sprinked. My coach got back from the run with a couple of the guys, and wouldn't you know it I started to cry a little, but my coach brought me on a quick run to cheer me up so I was okay.
I love your story !

Just one small flaw in your story,if Naruto got all of the Kyuubi's chakra he could destroy entire hidden villages with minimal effort.

Hm. I often wonder whether or not I should bother reviewing stories halfway through, I thought I might comment on a few things while I've thought of them though.

I quite like the story so far. The pairings are all done quite well, especially with Nar/Hina scenes.

There are some things though that I can't help but think you've exaggerated.

First; Sakura's reaction to Sasuke nearly killing Naruto... it just struck me as abrupt, unrealistic and overly melodramatic, and now this scene with Naruto trying to kill Jiraiya... once again, I don't really think they mesh well.

That said I am not a person prone to outbursts of anger therefore it's possible that these scenes are accurate and I simply can't sympathize with them personally... that's plausible.

Either way, I shall continue reading. It's nice to see that there's a sequel already in place as well.

Playtendo, Best of both worlds!

This is a really good story! I love how Naruto and Hinata came together and I like how Sasuke was seen as nicer, but still his calm cool collective self.

OH MY GOD
I thought this story was good before, but this... this is amazing I actually cried at the end, my heart wrenching at every single direction in anticipation (even if i read the story already,) The RadioPlay was... well breath taking, Naruto sounded like a bitch though, sasuke, even as i hate his soul sounded ultra badass, hinata made me want to laugh at her wimperings and shit..., truly amazing, truly

This is a great story!!

Definately adds to fav. stories.

Must read the sequel.
Great work!!

I never told you this before Songbird-san, but thank you for this story, and more specifically, this chapter. Without it, I probably would never have had my eyes opened to the cuteness of the NaruHina pairing. Now, I just can't get enough of it! Please keep up writing more of the series. I want to see more. Update ASAHP (As Soon As Humanly Possible).

AHH-SOME!! :D fantastic job. (:

Good story so far. Tsunade woukd not have sent for a genin to confim her theory about something involving naruto and the kyuubi, even if it was hinata. She woukd have sent for someone higher up in the hyuga clan.

Must... resist... urge to squeel... Naruhina! AW! This is so cute! This is the first NaruHina i have seen with a Naruto as close to the Anime as possible. It has renewed my love for NaruHina!