really bloody

but i like the part where sasuke adopts naruto as his bro

Omg kyubi...

..i actually like him and itachi.

Lol

Holy s even i wanted to cry

Ok ummmm i love this so far (:

I am quiet shock that your a mom and a wife and the other things you do but it also tells me how awesome of a lady you are!

I aint into naruhina, actually im into sasunaru i love yaoi 3 but a friend of mine reccomended me to read book one and two and so far its a bet to see if i can finish this in three days.

ill keep reading and reviewing.

Okay. There's no other word for it. This story is just amazing. It's just amazing! There's no other words! Just plain amazing!

I don't like the story. A lot of mistakes and errors. I don't think you're fit to be a writer. The plot of the story is ok but the way you put it together bothers me. Don't take this offensively or personally. I'm just keeping it real.

My first review for this story, I was going to wait till I was finished but things change.

Changing topics though, I'm really enjoying this story. The plot is not far fetched and moves along smoothly. Of course I love the NaruHina coupling, but it's not forced, and their relationship is slowly progressing. That is a definitely a plus.

There's nothing I dislike about this. Although I'm not a Sasuke fan girl, it's cool how he's not the teme he was in cannon. And of course Orichimaru is still being a evil creeper with Kabuto being his faithful lacky, but why'd they have to go and kidnap gama-kichi (probably spelled that wrong) he's my favorite frog.

Finally I like how 'inner Sakura' finally has an explanation, but a blood-line who would of guessed, really original idea there *gives thumbs up*. So now I must continue reading to see what Orichimaru is planning. But I will review again, believe it!

P.s.: Baa-chan adopting Naruto was so cool, the son of a Hokage twice over indeed.

I loved the story i started reading it yesterday got 21chapters read whilst was reading another two aswell. :c poor gamakichi ;w; DAMN YOU TO HELL OROCHIMARU! NO DAMN HIM TO WORSE THAN HELL! anyways 3 loved the story lots can't wait to read the next one

I was suspecting piranha too. It seemed to o so well with the jungle theme but alligators make sense.

i love this so much!

This is one of the best fics I've ever read. The relationships between the characters are very realistic and the overall storyline was spot-on. Overly cute at times, but it doesn't overpower the story, so that wasn't anywhere near as bad as it could have been.

Thank you and good work.

-L.M.

This fanfic is pretty much an example how should you write one. Everyone is in character, Sasuke behaves like I think he would after he was rescued at Valley o the End, not like complete bastard some fics make him. The relationship between Naruto and Hinata is paced realisticlly and I liked how Sakura started to doubt and fear Sasuke, instead of being brainless fangirl like some fics make her. Overall, this fic feels very “fresh” today, and probably will be such forever. I will be soon reading the seguel see ya!

loved it

Ahhh I can't wait to read the rest!

i love this story i always felt that sasuke wasn't evil just confused but after he killed orochmaru some thing changed in him for ever