Excellent story! Great job s2

Im so envious of your writing style! Its so crazy how you can do this. I feel the emotion and everything.

Im impressed. )

Oh, very good considering the mystery of their relationship within the movie, this is very well written, I hope you continue with other stories. Eve

i read your fanfic and i luv it, its so diferent from the ones i read :D

keep up the great work!

thanks for writing a story that reads as if it could have been part of the movie. I love its simplicity and candor. I only wish it was longer!

3rd story I have read. You never disappont. I thank the Gods...

Very good. Not quite as good as 'A Dream of Rain', but good all the same. It goes to show, the more you write, the better you write _

Good

Great Story! Very Well Written, really well done you are a very talented writter!

I love your story your very tallented have you throughts about a writting for a living.

very well written!

very well written! nice work. :)

ahhhhhh, the torment. I love it. I don't think that's what actually happened between Maximus and Lucilla according to the dialogue in the movie, but I'd love it if it were. I adore her character and you've made me love her more.

I love it!

very well written. u have an eye 4 dialog, that is crisp and complete. enjoyed it. thanks. z.