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| Kenzie493 2005-08-16 ch 1,  | abuse*sighs happily* How fantastic! I'm in love with both of those characters! It's a ver beutiful drabble! I 'specially liked: 'Feels shiny, all your colors spread out beneath me, wanting me, me more than anything' and 'I won't let Kumagorou see you like this: sweaty and panting, hair sticking to your face, open legs and darkened eyes. Only I get to see you like this.' ! What great lines! *squee* |
| scelerus animus 2005-08-13 ch 1, | abuseThis is so sweet... almost bittersweet in a way. And you do say so much with so few words. Really loved how you characterized Ryuichi. Just pure love. ^_^ Ryuichi/Tatsuha forever! Heh. |
| me 2005-02-15 ch 1, anon. | abusehey, theres this author, youko koenma who said you were here beta, actually she said a person named ish was her beta. anyway, pelease ask her to update her story, Thicker than water. If your her beta great ask her to update. if not great also ask her to update. anyone else who reads this ask her to update please! |
| Neko-Rinny 2004-09-14 ch 1, | abuseOh that was angst... Poor Ryuichi. I thought that this was really well done and a lot of feeling was put into it. Good job! Mreow! |
| kmyth 2004-09-11 ch 1, | abuseNice drabble. I don't know if I could write anything so good with such a limited number of words. I like how it's the mature side of Ryuichi coming out through his thoughts. I'm a big fan of everything Ryuichi, but I think his serious side gets downplayed too often. |
| Misa-chan 2004-09-11 ch 1, | abuseThis is great. Can never *really* get enough Ryuu/Tatsuha angst. ^_^; And it's quite nice how you actually managed to say everything that needed to be said in such a short piece, unlike most others of this length. :P I'd like to see more from you. ^^ |