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| Aira Silver 2006-02-20 ch 4, | abuseSorry I can't see chapter 3. I like chapter 4 though. I barely remember the story but I read it again and like it. Updat e again when you get an idea, soon hopefully. |
| LovePadfoot5867 2006-02-16 ch 4, | abusenope can't see chaper three but i love the fic so much! |
| HyPeR-PiPeR-312 2006-02-16 ch 4, | abuseOMG!! She lives!! ...Well...I already knew that...You're around on MSN... But wow...You live!! In the Charmed related literary sense of the word!! I've kind of lost track of Charmed lately... I don't watch it as much. The fateful episode ten of the eighth season is waiting for me to watch it. I haven't mustered the courage nor the strength to do so yet... Hm... So I haven't been following that... But... There's some fics that I read which help keep the Charmed flame somewhat alive in me... Anyway... Awesome that you updated! It was a great chapter too!! YAY! Now get back to your other fics!! And before I forget... I can't see chapter 3. It's not your browser... |
| Ravella 2004-11-10 ch 3, | abuseHey dude! Me, Shaz/Evey/Evelyn or W/E Nice story. Can't wait to read more. Keep it up. |
| HyPeR-PiPeR-312 2004-11-06 ch 3, | abuseThis fic is cool, you know...! Me likes it!! And it was kinda good to hear Chris saying that Bianca is a **! I am not very fond of that woman... But everything that you write is good! It's like...really detailed and descriptive... And I love description... Wow... I love this fic! Update soon, girl! I wanna read more, you fantabulous and wondrous writer! |
| JenaMariano 2004-11-04 ch 3, | abuseoh my god that is so sad. Nic he loves you why can't you see that. and bianca... oh just go away will you. update soon i love it. Chris and Nic all the way! JenaMariano |
| XxLauraBbzxX 2004-11-04 ch 3, | abuseAh, so me actually finding out bout your update forced you to update..am I good or brilliant? Nah, no thanks I prefer your Dictionary & wet fish to stay on your book shelf. Aww, that was a really sweet little chapter, really cute. Now I can't decide which is my fav couple: Chris/Nic, Chris/Faith or Chris/Bianca..I think you come second after Faith. Do you think after you've finished reading this review, it will suddenly jolt you memory into updating this Chris fic, speaking of which..I don't read Piper/Leo, just not me..now Chris...Chris I can read anyday and your song fics I've read. |
| XxLauraBbzxX 2004-11-03 ch 2, | abuseWow..god..wow..ok, I can't believe chapter 2 was updated on 20th Sep and it's 3rd Nov now & I can't have realised! OMG! This is Chris here! A Chris fic! I'm going mad! *hits head on desk over & over again* Sumone should shoot me for being so horrid & unloyal Drew *cries* Ok, to the point..stick to the point Loz..right..the point is...this story..Chris/Nic right. Wow..really cute couple and I get the Chris makes Nic weak at the knees, he makes any girl do that, specially me. You didn't want to know that thought didn't you..it's a kool story...and since this is your only Chris story..I DEMAND you update, no question bout it. This story hasn't been updated since Sep! |
| Charlotte Summers 2004-10-22 ch 2, | abuseAw Chris and Nic are such a cute couple!! I so loved the first chapter, that part where it's starts raining... *sighs* wow :D And the second chapter was just so sad! Really romantic... *wipes her tears* yeah sorry, I'm a bit high/emotional when it comes to Chris. :D A really great fic! Hope u update soon! |
| JenaMariano 2004-09-21 ch 2, | abuseoh my god!! (crying) i loved that chapter so much! oh i hope chris and nic get together soon, they are such a cute cuple. oh my god!! great chapter, update as soon as you can! JenaMariano |
| LoveJacoby 2004-09-14 ch 1, | abusewell i luved this fic i luv chris but this fic is very well written and realistic anywayz good job ~*~Katie~*~ |
| XxLauraBbzxX 2004-09-12 ch 1, | abuseLJ! Yo Yo! Sorry, I'm a little high her, yet reva bored at the same time but me glad that my account is working once more and if you haven't noticed by this review! Hee, hee, pleaz ignore me, going through one of those little mad stages *sighs* Ok, I'm going to review that Chris story, that I kinda read yesterday but only got to read today. Right, course not confuzzling at all woh! *rolls eyes round and round really fast* I think I'm ill! *starts dancing to 'Face Down ** Up'* wooh! I'm dancing, ARGH! I'm so ill! SAVE ME! I need food! Hmm... Wooh...sorry went through a little mad stage there, ok the story, what happens? God, needc to remember..come on Loz think...think..think..about Chris yes...em...sumthing about Chris I know it. Got it! Chris dreaming about a gurl, called Nicola! Yay! I'm good! I really liked this story, though I love any thing Chris it's not the point and it's really good for your first smash at it.:D You should write Chris fics more often, then I can read more of your stories, plus review them! Ok, I've no flames to give you for this, none at all coz it's a Chris fic and they all rox! I'm now going to nag you to update since I WANNA READ MORE! CHRIS CHRIS CHRIS! Hurry, dieing and sitting here waiting to see what happens next and I don't know! *holds anthame to throat* type or die! |
| Moon Destiny 2004-09-12 ch 1, | abuseI like it. It was kind of a movie into Chris's brain. It was kind of angsty but it really fit into the story. One thing I would recommend is reading over your story or getting an editor. There were some spelling/grammar mistakes but they weren't that visible and since the story was good it hide them. |
| JenaMariano 2004-09-11 ch 1, | abusei really like this story.i hope you update soon. i would reallylike to see what had happened between the two and if possible if they may get together again. so i hope you update soon. JenaMariano |
| foreverfree 2004-09-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat start! Please update soon:)! |