 Darth Grapefruit 2005-12-20 . chapter 1 I just got around to reading the entire thing today, even though i've known about it. i love it. Write more stories like this. But, Nicole, more "action" next time. and there will be a next time! |
 kilraragirl 2005-07-07 . chapter 1 OMG the was so
awsome |
 Maia's Pen 2005-05-13 . chapter 1Wow! Awesome, very powerful work. I really like Kurama. Hiei is my fave, but Kurama is a close second! ^.^
Damn, this was incredibly sad tho ;_; & that battle was mind-numbing, so intense!
You have such a lovely writing style. So organized, clear, and the emitions are conveyed wonderfully. My eyes were glued to every word. Each pharagraph was like a solo cliffie, excellent way of gripping the attention of your readers. I think HAUTNED was a very good title name: Kurama was surly haunted by that creepy dream! And huanted by the thick emotions that went with it.
Oh lord, Karasu really creeped me out. I get chills when I watch the episides back with him all leering over Kurama . . . *shivers* He's FREAKY!! & you portrayed his creepiness well.
I loved this:- His vision, slightly blurred from sleep, began to clear; new energy was coarsing his veins.- I can relate!! @-@ |
 Hedi Dracona 2005-04-26 . chapter 1Beautiful fic. In a creepy, morbid way. |
 Ilikeyaoi 2005-03-27 . chapter 1I liked it I think even though I hate the fact that kurama died but I... oh gosh im torn I liked but hated it I hope you understand what I mean cause I sure as hell dont :) |
 silver-dagger-113 2005-03-24 . chapter 1Wow...That was depressing...Yes, I love Karasu too! ^^ Great story! |
 The Ultimate Kai 2005-02-20 . chapter 1Good fic. And I have discovered your SECRET!! YOU HAVE ONLY SEEN THE DUBBED!! Either that, or you can only remember quotes from the dubbed. The quotes in the beginning weren't from the subs. They were from the dubbed. Haha. |
 YamikiofAnime 2004-12-31 . chapter 1 YOU CRUEL CRUEL PERSON HOW COULD YOU WAH EVIL EVIL I love Kurama so much what you did was wrong...yet...very enjoyable..I liked the story |
 Silver Foxglove 2004-12-25 . chapter 1Love love love this story! I read this before, but couldn;t review, so I am now! So very sad, and yet strangely beautiful and fitting as well. You've portrayed our lovely Karasu-sama perfectly, I almost feel bad for Shuuichi *grins* In any case, lovely job, I really, really like this story |
 shadow dragon 2004-10-29 . chapter 1 Another fic you might like for your c2 community is "Eyes of a raven" by Skeren Dreamera. |
 shadow dragon 2004-10-19 . chapter 1 This was a really good fic. You kept them both in character too. Good job. |
 xKokurox 2004-10-09 . chapter 1I liked the little story. I really don't have much to say except, well, hm...Oi, if you like Kurama angst i've got a story going if you're interested. I might even throw in Karasu if you ask nicely. |
 Lady Eden Death 2004-09-26 . chapter 1Brilliant! I LOVE Karasu/Kurama stories and this is one of the best ever! The ending was perfect with the way the story went. ^_^ You're a great writer!
-Layna, Death's Gift |
 Pat 2004-09-24 . chapter 1 Beautifully and believably written. Very true to the characters. Of course I wish the ending went the other way . . . . |
 Eishi-Ai 2004-09-12 . chapter 1Hmm...interesting. I spotted one mistake in your story, and one in the author's notes. But other than that, this story is pretty good. The descriptions were okay. I'm usually not much for Kurama dieing, but then again, I should've known, since this was a Karasu and Kurama fanfiction. Love is a strange, strange, thing, isn't it? |