0k 0ne word. twisted me likey wait thats more than one word is it not aww well it was awesome but really twisted

OMG

That is so sad! I love Draco Maloy he is my favourite character and I love this it is really good! 1 out of 10 I give this a...

... 8!

Hope I get to read more of yoru things!

Found it...read it...and really love it. Very well done.

Fantastic!
I loved it.
Especially the end.

O...M...G that was so good loved it^_~

wow...this was great...not the theme...child abuse is never EVER great...but the way it was written was fantastic and it (the subject) was handled very well...

It's written really well. I like the end when his father whispers in his ear and says 'big boys don't cry' because it sums it up. He is being tortured to death by Voldemort but he is not aloud to cry. Very morbid.

LIKE IT! TOTALLY!

great! make one for my hare-bear too!

though i haven't wrote a story yet... um was going to be a poem...well anyway thats was ok but i think the whole big boys don't cry thing is alittle macho

Wonderful, wonderful! Poetry is always wonderful! A very captivating story, loved the last line.

That is great. I really like it. Altough it is too bad it is not longer. KEEP WRITING!

Hm...when I first started reading this I thought of SEverus...but as much as I am not a big fan of Draco (though Tom Felton is something to look at) I liked it. Especially the ending,
Keep it up!
~Ani

that was really good for a one-shot.

so cool! really good