That was so incrediable. It is almost unbelievable at how well this fanfiction was written. The dialouge blended in beautifully and was very accurate with the show. I thought it was so cute how Marguerite was sleeping in the chair besides his bed. Fantastic story!

hey susan, great fic once again! hope to see a new story in the near future : ) grin. hey, knowing how long you've been writing such great ff's on , i was wondering if you remember a story or its author on a fic about roxton turning into a vampire and wanting marguerite to join him? if you do, i'd greatly appreciate the the title! you can e mail me at snstbruin@ thanks! peggy

I just loved. The interaction between Roxton, Ned and Veronica was super. And also Challenger, Summerlee and Marguerite. Those sabertooths were so scared. Great job.

A wonderful story through and through! I sure hope we get the rest sometime soon!

Wow, great ending to an even greater story! I always love reading your stories. They're always so unique and have great plots. I loved how you built up the M/R and N/V relationships and still kept everyone in character from the first season. I can't wait for your next story, don't keep me waiting too long!

Loved Roxton's musings on Marguerite. :) And nice insight into her ambivalence about her growing feelings for Roxton this early in their relationship. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Ah man, why did Marguerite have to run off? Ok, I know why, but still I like touchy feely moments & she ended it too quickly lol. Really good chapter, loved Roxton's response to knowing Challenger was involved in trying to fix their problem. Summerlee had better get those crutches to him fast before he bursts out of his skin in anticipation of what Challenger is up to lol. So we still don't know what it is that they found at the campsite. I wonder if it has anything to do with what Challenger & Malone are working on now. Hm, inquiring minds want to know. More please!!

Great chapter Susan! :D Um...I think there's a word missing from this sentence -- "She tossed her thick back over her shoulder in an attempt to appear nonchalant"
Marguerite would be offended to learn that she has a "thick back" that she can toss over her shoulder. ;) So...the chaise of doom rears it's head. LOL

Another great chapter! Too bad Marguerite couldn't stick around longer when Roxton was being so sweet!:) I wonder what Roxton is going to find, Summerlee couldn't lie to save his life! Hehe, can't wait for the conclussion!

Yippee, they found each other. Can't wait to find out what it is that Marguerite, Challenger & Summerlee found that would make Roxton "demand" to see it. Now all they have to do is make it back to the Treehouse in one piece. Can't wait for the next chapter. Very cool story.

Hi Susan,

This story is just fantastic - it's fun seeing the relationships back at "square one" as it were. The dialogue is perfect and the interactions between the characters is so in keeping with the timing of this story. I love it. Can't wait to see how this plays out. Thank you for sharing.

Jo

Phew, they are still in one piece:) You have an incredible talent, and have captured the characters extraodinarily well! Everything about your fic is so close to the show; even the way the gang is always divided. I honestly enjoyed a non-romance fic with such an interesting plot and excellent writing! Now just get everyone home safely and drive those **-cats off the Plateau:) Two more chapters to go huh? Why do I have the feeling this isn't *completely* over?

Nice chapter! Saving in the nick of time. And I liked how worried Roxton was about making up with Marguerite, even this early into their relationship. :)

Another great chapter! Everyone's safe for now, hopefully that was the last of the nasty kitties! I still don't know what Marguerite's "treasure" is and why Challenger and Summerlee are interested in it as well. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Well, well they've finally made it past the bad kitties. Now what? Marguerite and Roxton argue again, and then make up? Can't wait for the next chapter