She barely knew him and he was from the future (should be 'past', shouldn't it?) no less.

Hey

I came across this fic searchingf for Sirius Hermione romances, something I've gotten to like lately (althought I'm a Ron/Herm fan forever).

As a writter I must say a few things about this fiction. Well,first of all, I honestly like the plot a whole deal. The idea of getting Sirius into the future, instead of sending Hermione, and specially the way he discovers part of the past, is not only original but breathtaking.

Sadly, I must say this fic is rather disorganized. The beggining was marvelous, and this "end" was also fascinating. THe middle is a little mixed up and rushed, I mean, some things are out of place, as to why Ron would come close to a filthy slytherin, and why Draco has overcome his old prejudice to get to love Hermione. That would be a nice plot for a prequel, however, but I wouldn't insert it here, in this fic.

As to your story, and the last chapter, the notice that you will continue this fic, well, let me say something. I'm not on favour of stopping it here, sharp and blind, but I'm not against of stopping it either. As you said, the fic was not going much further any more. THerefore, I say, and pay attention, write the very last chapter, conclude the story, get only the important facts (for example, Voldemort appearing after Bellatrix, and saying everything, the classic "I'm your father, Luke" kind of thing). That way you will not only sattisfy readers, but you will sattisfy yourself.

Well, I added the story to favourites, I'm willing to read the last chapter. Good writting ^_^.

Ireth.

Hello Brittany!
I stopped translating when I saw there are no more chapters being uploaded to see whether it would be continued or not. Since not, I have decided to take the three chapters I have uploaded already out of the net. I hope this is convenient to you, because I think it is no use to have something there that will never be finished.
Bye,
Meta (C.)
ps: I am not angry at you, as I also have some unfinished pieces and can understand this case ver well. :)

please don't quite on this story!? i love it!~

ohh, ** this can't be good. can't wait for more

Come on please! finish this story. Kill the ** Bellatarix Lestrange.

Hang on...you made up the sorting hat's song? Wow. J.K Should hire you or sumthing. I like the story so far...wonder who's going back. Lol. Hope siri survives!

ok... that was so evil! i cant believe u stopped it rite there... jus when it was getting good... ug... update soon or i will hurt u... tehe

hm... not to be critical or somethin' like that, but wouldn't the Marauder's Map show KYLE to be SIRIUS?

I really like it and I can't wait to read more.

Hmm... so far, good start. Though I'd like to point out, that Hermione focusing on everybody's looks seemed to take away from the "moment". Other than that, excellent use of intrigue.

BAH! (shrieks shrilly at Bell.) OMG you HAVE to keep writing this! NOW! (please?)

ME

i love the story :) plz review soon

Wow... awesome writing so far! I'm really looking forward to another chapter or two! Hope you update real soon!

No no no no no! Please dont rush the ending! This is really good, I usually dont like time travel, but this story really gave me a different outlook... I LUV it and please dont make it only 'okay' instead of 'perfect (like it is now)' because you rush!