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Taintless
2006-05-11 . chapter 3
I like it! It's cute, sweet, and a lot of girls find themselves in this posistion. I'd like more backgorund into Draco and Hermione's relationship though! I liked when she did't open the door, that made me laugh! Good work, all in all.
TheStrawberryPopper
2005-11-11 . chapter 3
That was really good - and quite funny too, but would 'Mione ever let Malfoy get her pregnant :>)
Meirarien
2005-06-22 . chapter 3
Hi Alenor! I think the story is really great! But maybe you should move the storyline a little slower. It's all happening really fast, and that'll make it a shorter story than you probably want it to be. It's just a suggestion, but I've had the same problem with my current fic and it sounds much better when there is more detail and the story moves slightly slower.
pinkstar146
2005-05-11 . chapter 3
update! Please!
Ravenclaw-Chick
2005-03-11 . chapter 1
hey, I just wanted to let you know my story was deleated and i will be reposting it under a different name close to the original. Please keep reading it.

Ravenclawchick
TaurusGirl
2005-02-20 . chapter 1
sorry this isnt about your story that im reviewing this for... and i know i sound really weird right now... but on the harry potter fanfic Caught in his Net.. well u mentioned that u wondered if hermione was moving too far away to go to hogwarts.. im surprised that u didnt get the hint that hermione is going to be moving next door to draco malfy :) sorry i just wanted to tell... and im really hyper right now :S
Annoyed
2005-01-18 . chapter 2
You write, "People please don't report this as a chappie which is all author notes, I had to put it in."
NO, you did not have to put it in. What makes you think YOU'RE above the rules? Reported for abuse, with pleasure.
imogenhm
2005-01-11 . chapter 4
this is really well done. i can't wait for more.. i want to see what happens next.. please update again as soon as you can. please.
WickedFaith
2004-12-27 . chapter 4
wow. Tough break for hermione...I hope she can pull it through! Update soon
MidnightDreamer06
2004-12-21 . chapter 4
I love this story!! write more as soon as possible!
MidnightDreamer06
2004-12-21 . chapter 3
That chapter was so not crappie. It was great. It has me hooked.
Erilyn Rose
2004-12-18 . chapter 4
I think this story has a great story line and a lot of potential. My only suggestion is, maybe, slow it down a little. If you want it to rush, then by all means rush, it's sort of a style thing... but I like LONG stories, and I find it's easier to write 'em long, when you drag things out. :) It also drives readers, like me, bonkers waiting for the next chappie. So update, ignore me if you wnat, just update!!
Chicklepea
2004-10-14 . chapter 4
Hey sweet, read your latest chapter, liked it. i so knew it would be Dracos. I do that though, if i want something to happen i decide it is going to happen, and if it doesnt i stop reading before i can be proved wrong. All well. Please continue, unlike i tend not to do with my fics. But i try. Take care xx chicklepea
Kaylee-Angel
2004-10-14 . chapter 4
Hey! I like it :)! Damien sounds kinda omunious?! Lol... Loved Ron's reaction, "YOUR ALL BONKERS!". Thats just how Ron would react!

The whole british accent thing is a tad confusing... I'm british and i've never really noticed the hot british accent on any of the boys in my school! :S! Oh wait there, there is one boy! ;p lol. Anyways update a.s.a.p! I'm baffled as to why you don't have more reviews! This is a wonderful story, and i'm all exicted! o, Hermione's pregnant! (lol must calm down).
ENTRIKIT
2004-10-08 . chapter 4
More. Now. Please. ^_^

*shoves Little Debbie Oatmeal Cream Pies into bag* Buhbye! *leaves bag behind and dissolves*
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