ok i am a fan of cliff hanges and all but 4 years? isn't that kinda long to be leaving a story with a cliff hanger? please up date soon...i find this story very hilarious.

Please update! PLEASE PLEASE

hahaha, I can just imagine Alanna screeching and chasing him around the castle with her sword! Great fic. Please write more soon!

Love it! Please update this!

omg!!you have got to update this!!

NO! You can't do this to me! It's cruel! Please update soon!

OMG Neal did NOT just tell Alanna that he loved her! that is PRICELESS!

PLEASE FINISH, THIS IS HALLARIOUS!

pleae write another chapter

please please
update update update
please please
update update update

~amber~

Hmm... three years? Good ending though :)

PLEASE DON'T LEAVE ME HANGING! UPDATE EVENTUALLY PLEASE! PLEASE?

Love Dawec

no way! you have to update. i'm dying to know what gunna happen. i hope it's a kel/dom. i love kel/dom. your're story is very original. i love it. update soon.

reader in waiting,

Lady Kel

Write the next chapter. Write! Write! Write! Update! Update! Update!

WOW!You have to right more chapters:P Even if it kills you ..YOU HAVE TO!this so good


~*~Flirtatious~*~

damn!

you're evil!

hurry up and update you evil moo!

This is soo funny and great.
It's brilliant.
I hope you contiue.
It really is amusing to read!