I think you wrote Ororo's point of view really well. Nice story. :)

Loved the story. Completely moving. )

Beautiful,Verey well written. Perhaps Storm will get what she waits for? I'd love to find out

this sounds very promising

are u doing a sequel

will Logan ever notice storm?

that waz so GOOD!

I really love this. You have captured so much... I am most jealous.

very nice

Awesome - simply awesome! But what else would I expect from Pax? Keep up the good work Pax - I REALLY enjoy your writing!

Damn you! You're just too good. Ororo! Ororo! Ororo!

Wonderful! Bravo! Bravo! Encore! Sequal please! Sara V.

Excellent work! A very good look at Storm AND Logan.

Story telling is the art of story delaying. Her observations almost sound cold, until you let us see through her desire at the end. Very nicely done...

As always, a great and touching story!

Nikia