I'm lost of words. Your Story is more than Fantastic. Please continue it as soon as possible.

i thought this was very good. i do you have a link to the picture you drew? agian awesome poems. love the imagedry

wow i don't know what to think im confused. does tommy rape harry or is what i have no idea wtf im so confuzzled. but it is REALLY good poem

One word: Sexy.
(There is also a "hot," "fitting," and "damn, that made me happy in my pants" to be placed in this review, but I believe that the one word says it all. ^_^) Keep up the great work!!

~The One and Only

Amazing. Hints of Linkin Park in the line 'Crawling over my skin, his essence,'. The whole piece has a tie with 'Crawling'. Very well written and I love the rhyme scheme.