really, really nice story! great job

ever heard the term truly touched? well that's what happened to me...that was a really good story. I like the fact that you honestly depicted how max and alex are supposed to shared their feelings for each other-based on their characters. it was awesome!

such a great love story. It's so real, the writing is so expressive and exhilirating to read. The story is so wonderful, capturing such intense, but completely believable human emotions. bravo!

I liked it. Good chapter.

That was so sweet! Some grammer errors, but not too bad.

I like how you interchange Max's and Alec's POV's.

So sad and so sweet!

COolness. The grammer is abit messy-but not too bad. I liked this! ANd ALec's last though-sweet.

Awesome story, loved it! It was very well written and I loved characterizations, cos they were very true to the show. And I absolutely adored the ending, it was so sweet.

Thank you for the lovely story!

i your story.

i couldn't say more to it.

for that you come to my favourite authors (there are only three)

so i thought that i should make a review to your story because its wonderful. i can't remember the last time when i read something like that. you don't leave anything, every chapter follow right after the end of the last chapter.

but the most important thing is that i nearly began to cry when in chapter 11 max cried. i distracted me on purpose so i doesn't cry, but wow, i really wanted to do it.

*that's a positive comment: i cry because of your story and despite i'm very happy...

Aw...I love this story! It was so good. After reading your CSI story I decided t check out more of your writing. I really like this story and the way you write. Hopefully you write a sequel to this story. I think you could come up with some really good ideas for one. Like Manitcore coming after them because they find out about them being together and she finds out she is pregnant and they want the baby. lol...sorry getting carried away. Hope you keep writing!

a lovely story,above all, a completed one

max is an ordinary girl in love in your story.

so funny a start!

it was good *chuf*sequel*chuf* :D