Gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous. And might I add, gorgeous? Reading this, I feel like I'm watching it on screen. I love this:

She'd never felt more sorry for Buffy, never been angrier with her.

Powerfully accurate. Kinda like Spike that way (hm...)

Lovely, lovely execution of a cool idea. The final paragraph slays me.

a good story i loved it!

REALLY GOOD... I like the part where Buffy's like "And his hands could do things that I can't even spell, so don't even try and make me explain."

lol I thought it was funny... and Faith does have nice busums! How ever you spell that!

Good job, I liked it. Keep writing.