It took you a year? to write such a short amount? Jee. you must be pretty busy in your spare time. Luckly, i'm still in Middle school (yay me!), so i have a good amount of spare time. PLZ UPDATE SOON! It's ok. take your time, i understand, but i expect my money's worth! =)

VIDEL?! WEARING PINK?!

NO! NOT THE DUCK! ANYTHING BUT THE DUCK! Dende is gonna pay!

Oh gosh, hit the deck. i can't wait to see how THIS will turn out! Get out your notepads ladies and gentleman, because this one's for the history books!

LOL, that was really funny. Poor Gohan and Videl. I think it's really hilarious that Dende is torturing the people he is supposed to protect. Then again it's people of Earth that actually protect the planet instead him, so it works. LOL, update again soon. Later!

so far good, it will be interesting to see what dende has in mind for poor gonan and videl

good chapter, byes

nice chapter!
keep it up!

I hope the "Bishoujo Senshi Sailor Moon " part was ONLY A JOKE...!
Anyway, nice chapter, I wonder what Dende will do, because he had obviously tricked Piccolo and Mr Popo... :-S Poor Videl and Gohan... Well... UPDATE!!

hehe, this was funny, I especially laughed at the "Oh BIG BRO..." part... I know, I'm tired...

"You have the biggest appetite I've ever seen..." She had never seen Goku eat. X-DD
Aah, the end was SOO kawaii, I loved it so much!! :-D

hehehe, notice how the teacher called Gohan Gohan and Videl Miss Satan :-DD
Loved this, this is good, wow, who could Mr Green be, I wonder... Where did Piccolo get the cellphone? X-D

Ooh, Dende has some ideas! I just hope Mr Popo and his friend (Piccolo? But where the hell did he get the cell-phone??) won't stop him before he lands into action X-D

Ooh, I wonder what will Dende do to poor Videl...
When will Gohan figure it out? xD

Poor Videl. Goody 4 Gohan, I wonder how long it will take him to figure out what had happened. BTW, could you tell more about tht very-narrow-escape of Dende's (from Gohan)? What had he done? xDD I want to know soo much X-D