that was extreemly well-worded. Too bad this was only a one shot. Awesome though.

I like that! Nicely done!

Danka danka for the praise - nice use of the title!

A-N

Very poignant-wonderful word sketch of Vash, and also how most people are quick to villify without stopping to get the facts.

This is amazing. I love it. It gives you a point of view rarely ever captured. Please hurry with more stories. I can't wait.

Beautiful! Very lovely, sad, and true to the series. Quite a nice read.

And, I agree about ArkNorth - great writer, and I'm not just saying that because I'm his girlfriend. We met through reading each other's writing.

If you ever liked "Pokemon" at all, do yourself a favor and check out his "Lugia Chronicles."

That is a heart wenching short story, I felt like crying while I read it...(yes I have no life) I could understand how your character felt and I could see the ruin city in my mind...That was real good, please write another one!