OMG I like this story, wonderful. I hope you wiil update next chapter soon as possible.

I'm waiting!! Thx :)

gah! need new chapter. i just hope you havent stoped writing it. it seems about 2 to 3 years since you updated it. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE find it in you heart to write another chapter!

I know you haven't posted in this fic for about three years now and your muse is prolly deader than a doornail... but it would be really awesome if you posted in here again. :) It's one of my favorite fanfics ever. ^^ Even if you don't post in here again, continue writing because talent like yours shouldn't be wasted

AGH! RUWALK WHY DO YOU MAKE ALFEEGI SUFFER? ;__;

Okay, now for more seriousness. I can see it's be a while since you've last updated this fic but...PLEASE FINISH! All those fluffy scenes are so cute and you portary the characters very well ^.^ But...wah...Alfeegi!

omg, this story is so sad! but it the same time, i love the fluffy flashbacks and DK three way romance!! kwaiiness!! *squeels*
this is the first time ive ever read this pairing, so thanx 4 a good 1st impression! yayness!! Alfeegi really is so cute! ilovehimtodeath!
but seriously, all alfeegi fangirls grab your tourch and pitchforks! KILL THE EVIL SULKY BUTTHEAD RUWALK! CHARGE!
jk, but it really is so sad. ruwalk's meanness makes me want alffegi to get over him, but at the same time, i want someone to slap ruwalk so they can get back together!
ARG!! THIS IS SO COMPLICATED!!

O, WHYD YA HAVE TO MAKE EVERYTHING SO COMPLICATED?! I SEE THE WAY YOUR ACTIN' LIKE YOUR SOMEBODY ELSE MAKES ME FUSTRATED--!!

o, sorry. the song seemed to make it go with the moment! ^.^ (im perfectly sane, thank you... well, okay, not really.) RUWALK, WHY *DID* YOU HAVE TO MAKE THINGS SO COMPLICATED?!?!
well, i guess its not his fault, but it still drives me insane.

u write a good DK fanfic. awsome job. XD
as u can most likely tell from the previous paragraphs, i am most certianly interested in the out come of this fic, so please dun ditch it!! 0_0 TAKE AS LONG AS NECCISARY, BUT DONT DITCH IT!!
por favor? *puppy eyes*
hasta luego,
~SL~

PLEZ UP DATE SON! >.

Finally! I've been waiting to when would Lykouleon ordered Alfeegi to take a vacation, an escape from all this. Hmm, can't wait to what would happen then. Would the long distance effect Ruwalk so much? I hope it would. Please post the next chapter quickly!

...That lime-ish scene was very...intersting. >_<

Waah! I am seriously growing to love this fan fiction. While I'm not that big of a fan of the RathxRunexThats paring, I tolerate it simply for the RuwalkxAlfeegi-ness! Even though I feel so sorry for Feegi-kuns, I like to see him suffer! I guess that it's just the angsty side of me...

Next chapter, please.

OH MY GOD, YOU FINALLY MADE THE 11TH CHAPTER! DO YOU KNOW HOW LONG I WAS WAITING YOU EVIL LITTLE THING!? Sorry I couldn't update any sooner, I had alot of homework, but trust me. I felt so bad yesterday. I was trapped because of all the homewrk I had, but my teacher's are cool. THay just give out alot of homework, but they're still awesome. And here's the main phrase, HURRY UP AND UPDATE, OR I'LL KILL YOU! :D

Yay! An update, it was sad. I feel so bad for Alfeegi not that much for Ruwalk though. I don't know, hes suffering too but hes being a jerk about it,everyone is being so nice to him. And hes not even working poor Alfeegi is doing his work too. I kinda felt bad for Rune don't know why. Maybe because while he was suffering too Thatz and Rath were conforting each other. I liked how you wrote how his health is failing and that the pain is slowing killing him.

Its good that hes going to be leaving for a while. It'll do him some good to not think about Ruwalk. Anyway good/sad chapter. I'll be waiting for the next chapter.

Minea

more! please, they just have to get back together! Is something bad going to happen to Alfeegi while he's out? Will Ruwalk save him? please update! please!

this was an amazeing chapter! you wrote Alfeegi's failing health and mind so well, and that shower scene! it's so sad! i can't waite for more! it's so sad, and so... real!

love it. keeping it. Update soon. i cant wait for the next chapter. More angst plz

Ah, the prologue in this chapter really helped me to understand Ruwalk more. Why he acted like a brat and all. Hmm, so his memory didn't all vanished. He kept received a piece here and there but he refused to acknowledge them as his memory, his life before. So that's why he always acted so harsh to Alfeegi after he saw the memories. Cause he blowed his frustation out about the life he forgot to poor Alfeegi. I wonder, since Alfeegi already decided to withdrawn, how would all this effect Ruwalk? Hmm, I wonder how would Ruwalk react if Alfeegi gets hurt in work or even for protecting him. Please post the next chapter quickly!

great chapter. poor rune it sounds like hes gonna be sick. what was the deal with that last part on the last chapter it made it seem like rune saw the book or something. i'm guessing its rune cuz it said elf.