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| Vixen in Violet 2008-06-06 ch 1,  | abuseLOL! xD Love this. |
| MormonMafia 2008-01-17 ch 1, | abusehahaha that was really good writing. Bubble was so in character. well done! |
| Rikki8879 2006-05-01 ch 1, | abuseWell done, dear. Especially Bubble was really in character, dialect and all. :-) Couldn't quite agree on Patsy but overall it's a great job. :-) |
| Deeply Darkly 2005-05-24 ch 1, | abuseHey, pretty good! The end made me laugh - sounded typical of them both. Would have liked to read about them actually on site; could have been so much longer. |
| Magnus The Wolf 2004-12-11 ch 1, | abusepretty cool |
| Shanie-Bear 2004-12-09 ch 1, | abuseTerrific, I just love AbFab ^-^ You play their parts well, Bubble especially, I could picture every scene. Brilliant. The only advice I could give is that you could of made it longer and more detailed -- their was so much more you could of done with that fantastic storyline! I could even picture Jennifer Saunders writing a storyline like that for AbFab, the Amish thing was a bloody good idea. But I just think you could of done more with it if you know what I mean. Love, Xroix xx |
| Elle Hoffman 2004-10-09 ch 1, | abuseHeh.. That was great. Thumbs up! |
| Weekender 2004-09-30 ch 1, | abuseWhat a GREAT story! I love AbFab and you really nailed their "voices" and characters. Bubble was especially good - LOVE the "wek-up"! I laughed out loud just from the idea of them being in an Amish Country reality show. Strange thing is.. it could happen! Being drunk and falling down at the airport was great. Reminded me of the episode "France" when they went wine tasting got so trashed they couldn't even swallow - the wine just poured out of Patsy's mouth. I would like to make a request: take your time and re-write the piece making it longer including more details. The only change I would suggest is for Saffi NOT to tell them about Amish country. |
| Adina-Anne 2004-09-12 ch 1, | abuseThat was really cute! I don't watch the show enough to know all their names, but your story was so clear, and the characters so in place, that I could easily figure out who was who. Thanx! |