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| nothingtolose18 2007-09-21 ch 1,  | abuseAw! :( SO SAD! Great writing, too! You're an excellent author :D |
| Melissa 2007-05-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was so sad! For a minute, I thought it was Jesse and Becky, or Danny and Vicky, but it was Steve and D.J. I loved that story so much! |
| ed 2006-09-08 ch 1, anon. | abusei liked it. but i really had to pay attention. for a second i thought it was a gay story! |
| Twigstripe 2006-06-29 ch 1, | abuseWhy did you use my real name? grr oh, well I'm changing it when I turn 18 |
| BeeDiddy 2005-12-23 ch 1, | abuseo! so sad but really kinda leaving you hanging and not much info but thats ok it was stil cute! bi! |
| Silver Snake 23 2005-08-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt was ok a little dramatic, but fine. |
| pianoplayer129 2005-07-22 ch 1, | abuseMadha, Its was AWSOME!But what happens next.. does he remarry? well keep up the awsome work! Love, Heather |
| CSIindiegurl 2005-04-23 ch 1, | abuseto the last reviewer: Thats unacceptable, and you're spamming my mailbox. If you want to read some critisism I've gotten, read the reviews for HP Dr Seuss Style, and I will miss you my friend. You can't put an age on writing, adults have writing that sound juvie as well! You have the choice of improving or acting like a butthead, take your pick! |
| MiniMeMenen 2005-04-21 ch 1, | abuseI think that this story was okay. It wasn't bad, but it wasn't too good either. Especially how it went from Steve's POV to 3rd person POV. That was confusing. Some people probaly thought it was good, but I didn't. Do better next time. ;) |
| Benjimaddenfan 2005-04-21 ch 1, | abuseIt made me Cry!but it was really good! |
| smellysockssuk 2004-11-18 ch 1, | abuseAw that was so sad, and yet so sweet! Poor Steve! Poor Cassie! I was a bit confused by which charactor was telling the story at first, but it was really really good... write more! update it and write about cassies life!! will steve ever re-marry? What happens when Cassie gets older?? How did Stephanie and Michelle act towards DJs death? Write more! pleez! |
| FH Fan 2004-10-14 ch 1, anon. | abusePretty good, but confusing. The beginning was too hard to follow. I understand DJ died, but it sounds like someone else died too. Please explain. |
| Rena 2004-10-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery well written. I enjoyed it |
| Donny's Girl 2004-10-02 ch 1, | abuseu suck! you made me cry! haha this tory was awsome! wow, you really know how to make a person cry! oh, poor deej, i love her! she's my favoirte next to joey, jesse, and michelle. yeah, so deej isn't my favorite, but still! luved it! monica |
| Flaming Gun 2004-09-22 ch 1, | abuseoh man this story made me cry... but don't get me wrong it was GREAT!! |