as I said in my other review that was deep
I can't write poetry that good!
I still try though! lol

I really love poetry! & thank you for you're review!

As to what you said about my story, I noticed you reviewed my very first one that I wrote over a year ago! LOLOLOL It IS pretty dumb isn't it? *blushes* Your--what you call them? Pottersues?-friends are quite write about it! They made me laugh cuz my first fic is a total screw up! LOL Even though I don't remember much about it! HAHA

The main idea for "Merida" is that I'm tired of all the "Harry/this girl" shippers or the "Harry/that girl" shippers (ie, luna, ginny, hermione, cho) & all the slash shippers with people wishing Harry would go with Ron! (Like THAT would ever happen! LMAO) I've nothing against slash though. Anyway, so I made my own ship! LOL

It gets much better by the second & third one, maybe because I've been writing more & I'm more experinced but still, the first fic is still special simply because it is my first!

Anyway, I hope you write more poems, I really liked this one.

Later...

This is wonderful!