Very nice.

Not being a fan of MPFC, I had no chance to solve this. Still, it was a good one, and somehow I can just see Oscar pulling something like that.

i really like the six million dollar man he is really awsum and i think that you shood write more stories because you are really talltented

Loved it. Really good sense of humor and very much in character. The only criticism is the word should be pillar, not piller. Otherwise a really good job.

this is the start of a deacent story, but there are a couple of little changes, you could make to strengthen the continuity:

1. when you change scene have a heading, I got confused as to where the events where takeing place and the time diffrence between them.

2. check you work, you missed words out which caused me to stumble at points in your text.

OMG, that was so good! Being an OG fan and a secret agent for MPFC, I of course had to love this!

I'm hoping and praying people don't spoil it in the reviews!

(BTW: That's John Philip Sousa and the Liberty Bell March...)

Original! I loved it!

That's funny-I love this story!

You got the man's dry humor just right-this is so-off the wall perfect!

MPFC-very good-I'll have to use this at work!

Thanks for the good read!

i loved that! it was funny and i could almost see oscar sitting there behind his desk discussing mpfc with an aspiring field agent... great!