Gorgeous. I loved the way you wrote this, with the imagery and the broken storyline. It really got me into the story, and the last line was just heartbreaking. Pretty pretty. Thanks!

you're really good at this. stylistically, its very immidiate, very much inside their heads, and that works extremely well for a story set in a jumping narative and a car accident.
very cool.
i love the way you broke up the timeline. it makes for intersting reading (something fanfiction seems incable of grasping sometimes)
wonderful, i enjoyed this very much :)

Wow, great writing, very original. I hope you plan on writing more Chlex in the future, you got their interactions perfectly ;)

I refuse to admit that Lex is anything but fine at the end of the story!! He's strong and a Luthor, he'll make it!! Excellent story, I like Chloe and Lex working together and Chloe not letting Lex give up!!