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| Mei-lan 2006-10-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseGorgeous. I loved the way you wrote this, with the imagery and the broken storyline. It really got me into the story, and the last line was just heartbreaking. Pretty pretty. Thanks! |
| Lynx16 2005-06-07 ch 1,  | abuseyou're really good at this. stylistically, its very immidiate, very much inside their heads, and that works extremely well for a story set in a jumping narative and a car accident. very cool. i love the way you broke up the timeline. it makes for intersting reading (something fanfiction seems incable of grasping sometimes) wonderful, i enjoyed this very much :) |
| SixEcho 2004-09-14 ch 1, | abuseWow, great writing, very original. I hope you plan on writing more Chlex in the future, you got their interactions perfectly ;) |
| autumngold 2004-09-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseI refuse to admit that Lex is anything but fine at the end of the story!! He's strong and a Luthor, he'll make it!! Excellent story, I like Chloe and Lex working together and Chloe not letting Lex give up!! |