Awe

Very good. I expecally liked the fact that Legolas finally let his grief out.

SO sad! When you put it that way, it's clear why Legolas finally gave into his sea longing and went to Valinor after Aragorn died, instead of waiting for Gimli to pass on too. You captured the emotion quite nicely.

wow... that was... deep. I mean I actually liked it, & trust me, when it comes to poems, I'm not that easily impressed. And I like the way that it resembles what some one would actualy think.

Wow, what a great Peom. You are really talented at this stuff. Keep up the good work. Hideki