Hm i don't want to request it but if you can/could when you have the time- how about writing a reaction chapter or a follow up chapter with charlie and etienne. They don't have be super long but don't make them super short either.

~Can you think about the idea?

Charlie
- would be when he meet's up with wanda
- charlie reading the letter she wrote
-him returning back

Etienne
-him returning back home
-remy reading the letter she wrote and his reaction
-etienne reading the letter she wrote

OMG. what a great story, i loved everthing and the letter :_( so sweet i was about to cry.I am so glad i found this and i cant wait to see what else u have.

Ok this story was really good. But that last chapter. That was wonderful. It actually made me cry. I don't know what else to say it was really above and beyond. I can't wait to read the rest of your stories if the plot lines are as good as this one.

ok, this is totally cool, love you for writing this!!
ur amazingo!

hi this is an amazing story!!
a great idea and i love it!!
love the relationship between Rogue Etienne and Charlie
their just too cute for words lol XD
glad there was some great Romy in there :)
awesome letter lol
it would have been interesting to see future Remy's reaction to this letter though lol
great work!! XD

So I just rediscovered your story... I don't know what happened, honestly. Of course, I was busy during the period of time that you were writing this story in my last year of high school, so that might be what happened...

But that's not the point. The point is that I really liked it. It has great parts to it (including the "That could sound so sexual if we weren’ family" line from chapter 13 - that cracked me up so bad!).

love it !1

Loved this story pure fun and way interesting.

I like it. Keep up the good work. Charlie and Ettie were hilarious.

OMG!! I haven't read a story that good in so long. I really enjoyed reading it. It was funny and yet serious at the same time. You did a really good job on it!

OMG! I'm in love with your story!

AW! :) It made me cry! In a good way of course. I absolutely love stories that make me cry. Anyway, it was awesome, keep up the good work.

i love the letter!! i wish i could see remy's face when he reads it. ^_^

I was delighted to find you added another chapter what caused it I thought you weren't going to be doing anything else with X-men oh well I hope we get to see Remy's reaction to the letter it'll be so funny LOL Remy trembling in fear because of a letter.
Thanks Rogue

Oh gods, I can't breathe from laughing so much. This is such a lovely way to bring things to a conclusion. Good job mate. And now I have a mental picture of Logan grinning evillily before descending upon hapless FutureRemy whilst Rogue pulls her gloves off and ties her steel-toe-capped boots just a little tighter. lol. Fantastic.