I never knew grub could be smart! an as for the end line AWESOME cant wait to read next chapter. i wonder who the baby will look like...

OMG, AWE, plus Shock, equals SHOCK AND AWE! Your work is amazing, glad you wrote a sequel.

I am brainless and I am one of the smartest girls in my school except for real living famous people (and spelling I know so many words I can't say because I don't know how to spell them)but if I had to guess I would say Villon was a poet because of his name which screams Shakespeare (who has not yet proven he wrote Macbeth, they think it was a (can't spell proper and long name starting with p) false name some guy happened to have that name, am I right and if I'm wrong at least I have a username.

Artemis decided not to feel happy about the news. They were back in Haven, the fairies surely knew who he was, and he'd end up being mind-wiped again, forgetting about Holly… "How did the LEP get there?" he asked, hoping to get his mind off her.
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yay! Arty's not mind-wiped again!

Uh oh! Where's Patty gone?

I hate you.

This is a classic af ff. but, artemis wouldn't date holly. his hormones wouldn't allow it.

ppshh if im at least 17... how's 16.5? and yes i will be reading the sequel!

Aw . . . I think you've just sucessfully converted me to A/H. I need to go red cliched crap, now . . . Just for the sake of my pride. Honestly, this is beuatiful, creative, wonderful . . . everything one should look for in a fanfiction. It's /awesome/.

One little thing though, dude, where are these links? I mean, "picture of object/scene x here. Link on profile" And, yet, when I check your profile, the pictures aren't there . . . I'd like to see the; likely because I saw your cover-art, and it was great. I'm just full of sugary compliments aren't I?

I agree completely with the Colin what's-his-last-name being like Artemis statement. They're so alike, it's not even funny. I don't really think Mary's like Holly, only that she grows a heart (but Holly /always/ had the heart . . .). Either way, I lurve that book. I love your story, too. It's cdreative, definately. The tube thing, though, and the thing with Fragrent Flower, those were kind-of weird, but I guess the latter was important to the plot, and the other was funny, so either way, still incredibly awesome!

E! *squees* I love it1 I love it! I love it! I haven't a clue wherew "Aztec" comes in, but it's merely chapter 5. This is amazing, but one little thing that I noticed was the Opal has brown eyes (that apparently rock at the mesmer), and you said she had sky blue. it's an insignificant detial, but it changed how I looked at her, for a minute . . . But still, more chapters to read, and every chapter ends at a minor cliffy . . .

*cackles* like, 5 people have recomended this story to me, and I am /so/ happy I read it! Your writing style is actually very adult and descriptive. Have you anything published in ink, not gigabytes? Can I have the ISBN?

Either way, chapters to read, sunlight to avoid by sitting at the computer reading said chapters XD

Okay, I couldn't help but review this chapter. I nearly fell out of my seat laughing--AGAIN-- during the whole "Timmy Cash Flow" ordeal. Heck, I've been doing that a lot during this story. But Cash Flow was flipping epic.

Deny it if you want, but you really DO write like Colfer, especially during the earlier chapters, before Holly and Artemis started getting really close. The only difference is that you're a little more, *cough*, "mature" in your writings, if you get my drift. *COUGHINUENDOSCOUGH*

I am a bit (as in a LOT) miffed about Artemis' intelect being taken. He isn't right without it. However, I should probably go finish reading, judging how I only have a few chapters left. Something tells me somebody's going to die. o.O

.~:Hailey-Stone, yo:~.

lvd da fic!simply amazin...deserve standing ovation!plz post da sequel soon

Great fic!