It's good. It's really, really good

Cute. a bit... completely ooc... but cute. a pity i didn't cry. it's getting harder and harder for authors to make me cry and I had hopes... never mind.

I LOVE THIS! bye the way, Opal Kaboi is not blond

this is an amazing story. i can never thought of using aztecs as the story plot. this is an amazing awesome story. i stayed up till 3 to read it you know? haha! anyway, keep up the good work!:)

I never knew grub could be smart! an as for the end line AWESOME cant wait to read next chapter. i wonder who the baby will look like...

OMG, AWE, plus Shock, equals SHOCK AND AWE! Your work is amazing, glad you wrote a sequel.

I am brainless and I am one of the smartest girls in my school except for real living famous people (and spelling I know so many words I can't say because I don't know how to spell them)but if I had to guess I would say Villon was a poet because of his name which screams Shakespeare (who has not yet proven he wrote Macbeth, they think it was a (can't spell proper and long name starting with p) false name some guy happened to have that name, am I right and if I'm wrong at least I have a username.

Artemis decided not to feel happy about the news. They were back in Haven, the fairies surely knew who he was, and he'd end up being mind-wiped again, forgetting about Holly… "How did the LEP get there?" he asked, hoping to get his mind off her.
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yay! Arty's not mind-wiped again!

Uh oh! Where's Patty gone?

I hate you.

This is a classic af ff. but, artemis wouldn't date holly. his hormones wouldn't allow it.

ppshh if im at least 17... how's 16.5? and yes i will be reading the sequel!

Aw . . . I think you've just sucessfully converted me to A/H. I need to go red cliched crap, now . . . Just for the sake of my pride. Honestly, this is beuatiful, creative, wonderful . . . everything one should look for in a fanfiction. It's /awesome/.

One little thing though, dude, where are these links? I mean, "picture of object/scene x here. Link on profile" And, yet, when I check your profile, the pictures aren't there . . . I'd like to see the; likely because I saw your cover-art, and it was great. I'm just full of sugary compliments aren't I?

I agree completely with the Colin what's-his-last-name being like Artemis statement. They're so alike, it's not even funny. I don't really think Mary's like Holly, only that she grows a heart (but Holly /always/ had the heart . . .). Either way, I lurve that book. I love your story, too. It's cdreative, definately. The tube thing, though, and the thing with Fragrent Flower, those were kind-of weird, but I guess the latter was important to the plot, and the other was funny, so either way, still incredibly awesome!

E! *squees* I love it1 I love it! I love it! I haven't a clue wherew "Aztec" comes in, but it's merely chapter 5. This is amazing, but one little thing that I noticed was the Opal has brown eyes (that apparently rock at the mesmer), and you said she had sky blue. it's an insignificant detial, but it changed how I looked at her, for a minute . . . But still, more chapters to read, and every chapter ends at a minor cliffy . . .