interesting ending...it sounds like a fairy tale. I like it.

I like this. A very subtle J/S pairing - obviously, given the target audience, it had to be, but nevertheless, obviously a lot of love went into this fic.

Bravo!

oh so cute! i love it! Jareth is the coolest character and I love it when he and Sarah end up together. Well done, I hope to see more from you!

This was rather good. It explains some things that wern't said in the movie.

Wow, this was a good extention. Considering this is for 10-9 year olds, I love it. I wish I had a cool assignment like "Create your own Labyrinth story"...

Gah, can't have it all, right?

I have to admit, this is a pretty good extension to the Labyrinth story. It is written in a way that will allow children to understand what is going on, but adults will still like it.