There are no words... I would really actually like to download this song. This makes me think a little bit differently about the Autumn that I was always personally fond of. Autumn is peaceful, everything is quiet, the dead are morned for once again. I find Autumn fascinating but terribly sad after I read this story. Brilliant story.

That was so beautifully depressing.

There were nine tombstones though - who were the others?

At first it was hard to read, but it became clear at the end.

Like I already said - beautiful.

That was amazing. The descriptions, the usage of the song, the backstory...everything. It's amazing you did this in one sitting - and that was one great sitting. Brilliant. This is going in my favorites.
You painted a pretty picture into my mind. That's what a writer should do, and you did that. Great work.
~T

hi, i just read your story and i like it
i hope you do a other one

Um...it was different. I think I'll have to hear the song. However, nice imagery with the trees and ravens. Very vivid.

A beautiful story. Very sad, and very well written. I loved it.

Ur fic, though beautiful, has brought tears to my eyes and made me thoroughly depressed so now i've got to go on the search for some good fluff

slightly odd i think and so sad all her family at once?...

That was really, really good. It gave me the chills what with the story reminding me of halloween and ghosts and such. Poor Ginny.

I love all your stories. This one will be added to the list.

Tiny~
Hmm. Powerful as hell, this piece. (That's a bad comparison, but... wow. It, as corny as it is to say so, moved me to tears at the end of it.)

The 'feel' of the piece is smooth though; it does feel as if you wrote this in one go... and captured a lot of emotion and history and poignance and power with it. ^^; A few minor spelling and grammar glitches, but nothing to worry about... my, Autumn *is* here. And you worked the story in with the song just brilliantly. That can be tough to pull off, but you did well, by and large.
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Kudos, and Starry Nights,
~Sabriel.

-.- Okay...i left off reading Shabanu for my English class because i teared of several times...only to tear up at this! but i will download the song. this was really good...despite the teariness.

go ahead, laugh at me all you want. I cried. It was soo sad. Very good story, I loved it.