FINISH THIS STORY! it so rocks thus far so don't go starting another this definitely has extreme potential

you rock keep it alive!

a little sad but sounds pretty good to me

PART OF THE STORY! Not the new one!It's absolutly PERFECT!
UPDATEUPDATEUPDATE! *favs*

It should be part of this story. How could you leave this so unresolved? I love it and want to know what happens. Oh, please. So angsty. So wonderful..aghh...Adds to fave and alerts*

Well- written
But so sad.. :(
I loved it anyway

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Just wanted to comment on what you wrote about how people view twins. I totally agree with you. I'm a twin as well, not identical, but kinda like you, dark hair, dark eyes, asian...aw...you're identical twins, aren't you! The whole thing about people never really getting to know you as a person is so true. It really is "the twins" and never our real names. It isn't a bad thing, but we really have no close friends but each other. A future without the other seems alien, even though people always ask us don't we want to do seperate things. I do sometimes think what if my sister and I weren't twins, but i think in the end, I wouldn't change anything - I'll always have a friend who is there. I just was struck by the comments you put in here about being twins - except for the twincest part, I'm glad there is someone out there who thinks the same way about the twin phenomena as me.

I like your last line, it sort of hits the core of both of them. Uh, don't make the whole "both figuring out they're madly in love" thing sappy. It's annoying and only makes the rest of the world feel really crappy.

Wow, this is almost exactly my opinion of George. I mean, most people think of them as a dual element and Order of the Phoenix really helped sort them out.

Incest is so gross. But I like angst. I like angst when one of them loves the other one, but the other one kills him. Ah, drama and angst -huggles- Come on! -shiver- I hate incest. -shakes head-

I love it! Please keep writing more. Your work is good!

Please keep writing, it's very good!^_^

You should definetely make this into a story. I was thinking that all the way through both chapters. Please continue and keep up the good work.

;_; Is that the end? 'Twas really good.

i'd love to see more of this. this is like a really tasty teaser. i send pixe stix and pocky to help the creative juices flow.

liked the idea of the secret journal, liked the ust. if you decide to extend this, you could write it as a series of journal entries.