I like it so far. Except that I don't think Drizzt would name his son after his evil step- father, but maybe that's just me. I was weirded out at first about Catti-brie being there(she'd bee at least 120ish) then the magic ring came in and it made sense. Deffinitely continue it.

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Semdai Bloodquill

I kind of liked it but for some reason I was disturbed by the fact Drizzt's son kept calling Cattie Brie mother...that's my fault though..and I feel stupid to say this but I also was bothered by how drizzt got hit so easily by his son...unless he's very talented(which he most likely is)...then i'm sorry:(

Well, it has potential to be a good story.

There are a few grammar mistakes running about that need to be fixed. (So do I for that matter...)

Work on your Dwarven accent. it is a bit hard to do, but you should get the hang of it quickly if you keep writing it.

...one thing I am confused about...Drow are supposed to live between 600 to 800 years if they aren't killed before then...in this case, Catti-brie's ring is almost over and her 200 years up. Rizzen seems pretty upset about dying before his father...what about the death of his mother, which would become before his natural time?

How come it took them so long to have a child?

It is yeah, not yea. It is Taulmaril, you got the a and i muddled up...um...Catti-brie is about 5'4" as she is the same height as Drizzt.

Well, good luck with your writing.

SilverWolf7