Aw! So cute! I really love this and hope you write more soon!

I like! So cute! Mew!

No problem. :D And this is so cute/awesome.

"That and the loud snoring, sudden disappearances and the less-than-desired timing of certain make out sessions." I read that and thought, "Whoa, that's so Gippal." XD Particularly the make out sessions... Whoo.

What sucks most about writing your name "Barali" when it's "Baralai" is that it'd be hard to wedge in an "a." If he just forgot the "i," it'd be so much easier. Poor Baralai! XD

And...baby-sitting for Nooj? Lord. If the mother is who I think it is, those children would be GOLDEN.

This is very cute, and very funny. I can't wait to see what else your great mind comes up with.

Hah! *snickering* I remember this one. And even not knowing the characters at all, I can still appreciate the dynamic between them. XD
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~Nightengale

why do i have this strange urge to eat skittles...

Funny! It could be a romance movie, y'know.

Baralai, Gippal, and the one thing that stands between them...
SKITTLES!

I was going through old Gippalai fics and stumbled across this. I miss your writing! :D This was hilarious. I laughed out loud quite a bit. XD Only one thing -- "'Not at all.' Croaked Baralai, shaking in rage." After someone speaks like that, there should be a comma, and the word after the dialogue shouldn't be capitalized (unless it's a name).

That was really funny.
Poor Baralai though. hope you have more of these.

"whatever colors those DOTS from hell came in" and "As soon as I finish counting these skittles!" had to be the best lines in this thing XD so hillarious-- very cute n_n I liked it, there's going to be more right? I hope so~ *keeps an eye on story*

~Prince(ss)

^^; poor Baralai...

SBQ: So cute!

Hisoka (Yami no Matsuei): Reminds me of someone!

Tzusuki: Soka, where are the sweets?

Hisoka: Oh I remember!

Gippal: I would never neglet my B over sweets! As B has the sweetest taste!

Baralai: *Blushing furiously*

SBQ: Keep writing!