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cherry-star-aus 3/12/05 . chapter 1
awsomly deep its a one -shot right if not keep going rock on mate
AshenRoseShadow 3/6/05 . chapter 1
I have come to the conclusion that it is impossible for you to write a bad story, which is a wonderful thing. Your storys enchant me, it is so strange. Keep up the excelent work!
darkness-consumes-me 1/13/05 . chapter 1
beutiful.
Orangeyougoingtodeletethis 10/2/04 . chapter 1
VERY . . . veryveryveryvery good

Update soon
BubblyBoo 9/25/04 . chapter 1
I like this story and I love your writing style. I can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon please!
Yukikaima 9/18/04 . chapter 1
Can't miss the foreboding feeling... Not in an eerie manner, but I feel the tendrils of memory creeping around, ready to pounce once you get into the meat/chapters of this fic.

That is attributed to how well you set things up, my friend. ;3 And you have to admit, for all reading this, that know you, it's flattering to have any sort of dedication, especially a well thought out one.

This holds delicate beauty and promise, and I can't wait to see it take shape, no matter how depressing it might get. *shrugs* After all, life is not all sunshine and happiness, but there can still be beauty and simplicity in the darker parts. Knowing you, that's exactly what any kind of angst will have-glorious beauty.
Silent Choas 9/17/04 . chapter 1
Awesome...brilliant and that's just the summary that drew me in! Your writing has improved over the years that I've been reading it please continue your writing beautifuly so far _
DarkShadowFlame 9/16/04 . chapter 1
Oh... You can tell I haven't been online much, because I would never let a story this brilliant go undiscovered for two whole days! This is so good- I am loving the style. It's a sort of soft, distant tone. It feels like it should be narrated by a professional voice actor, the kind who people describe his words as "like butter", no matter how lame that analogy. It's smooth and creamy- yes, I am talking about the story. It's no use telling me a story can't be 'creamy', because this one is. If it were a food, it'd be yogurt. One of those really distinctive flavors.

I can really visualize this- the story practically screams "Come with me, take my hand". This is incredible and I LOVE it. I cannot wait for you to post the next chapter!

Ciao

Kristina

(PS- If you have it planned out, which is great, do you out of curiosity know how long it'll be?)
Priestess Kaiba 9/15/04 . chapter 1
*sniffles* I don't know why but I got all teary eyed. ;_; It has a melancholic feel to it and I love it! _ LOL! It's very interesting Mamo-chan and I'm intrigued to see what the next chapter will bring. Until the next one, au revoir! _
alyce 9/14/04 . chapter 1
aw how beautiful,

i love the first and last paragraph hell i love all of it! damn this is only the prologue and im already adticted,update soon.
Kekewey 9/14/04 . chapter 1
Now this story I'm looking forward to. I can't wait to see how the violin fits in with the story and how Tea also comes into play. Update soon please!
kasiuke 9/14/04 . chapter 1
Beautiful. I like the way you write. It's so...I dunno like a very old fantasy story, you know, the ones you love so much that you read them over and over again? Hope this fanfic turns out the same way
Mokuba's Official Glomper 9/14/04 . chapter 1
MOG:I WUV IT! YAY! {Glomps Mamono} CONTINUE SOON!
Mina-chan AMD 9/14/04 . chapter 1
Mina: This is really good so far. I can't wait to read the rest! I have to finish my homework! Update soon! Ja!
Aura Black Chan 9/14/04 . chapter 1
This is a good start, I like it.
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