 Silivren Tinu 2005-04-08 . chapter 1This story is a masterpiece on the art of deception. At least, you deceived me. I really thought the wolves were the evil force here... I didn't know just how creepy butterflies, birds, flowers and rabbits can be... *shudder*
I definitely didn't like this single innocent butterfly at the end of the story, it reminded me too much of the end of the Gremlin movie... who and what has survived this time, and what will come of it, I wonder?!
I really liked this beautiful picture of Legolas with the rabbit, though it didn't turn out to be so innocent and beautiful after all. Lomelinde reminded me of Tom Bombadil or perhaps even more his wife, at least in the beginning. Perhaps the black sheep of the family?! :-) |
 Estelle1 2004-09-26 . chapter 5Wow! Now that is something we don't read everyday! Very creative! I like the idea that the wolves were actually good. :) But what happened to Elrohir? Where was he taken to?? Need...to...know... LOL! |
 NaughtyNettie 2004-09-24 . chapter 5This was such a creative, imaginative and well written story...as always. I look forward to your next one. |
 Ertia 2004-09-23 . chapter 5Yay! A happy ending! :)
Still, possibly one of the stranger of your strange tales. And I see something new in my mail-box as well! YAY! |
 Orchida 2004-09-22 . chapter 5It's such a shame it's over. I love mysterious fics such as this one, there's something about the strangeness of it all, wonderful!
I loved how fast you updated too, it's amazing considering most fics I get hooked on, seem to slow down and then disappear entirely. Congratulations on restoring my faith!
I love how you portray the characters, especially the twins, I thought the picture of the pair of them asleep, Elladan's arm protectively around his brothers was just adorable. I hope you have a new fic out soon, I'll be watching! |
 Red Tigress 2004-09-21 . chapter 5Go figure, I can't keep plants alive either. I was always a fauna person...I'm glad the wolves won, wolves are so cool. Next to tigers of course...ANYwho, nice story I was kinda sorry to see it end that soon, but great job anyways. I hope you start another story soon! |
 Mornflower 2004-09-21 . chapter 5Morn: *is watching butterfly that kinda went unnoticed by the rest of the crew* um...butter...bu-butterfly *starts chewing lip nervously*
Lego: what did you say?
Estel: did you say french fry
Elladan: OO! I want french fries!
Elrohir: OO!! ME TOO!!
Morn: n-n-no i didn't say that..i said-
Lego: I want french fries! *pouty face*
Morn: um...um...um...ok...um...to McDONALDS!!
~*Mornflower*~
sorry...this kinda lacked the usual humor..but great story! Post another one soon! |
 NightShadow131 2004-09-21 . chapter 5Lol.. yeah, I guess it was a good guess.. ^^ Good thing Elrohir was off resting! Those are some really good wolves there! *nods* Wolves are awesome! yup yup. They helped out a lot... you should give them a treat... *shifts eyes*
It's a good thing that Elladan woke up and was aware enough to walk and everything.. as well as Legolas. That would not have been good.. nope nope.
It's sad that it's over already but it was still very, very good! ^^ Can't wait 'til you post your next fic!
Ja ne ^_~ |
 tychen 2004-09-21 . chapter 5 Quicker than me again!So glad that our favorite Elves didn't end up as 'grow bags'.Being strange I kept thinking of ads.for along the line of 'New super strength Elvin Grow',for all your garden's needs!The fruit might have looked good ,but what a waste of some of the most marvelous beings in Middle Earth.The concept of a primal evil,engaged in the neverending struggle with the forces of light outside the normal bound of time/space was most intiguing.Although long stories are wonderful,its been nice to have this one so quickly,and the quality as usual has been excellent.Lookforward to your next outing to the 'Dark Side',from the safety of my home ,bear in hand and lights on! |
 Alexa 2004-09-21 . chapter 5 A wonderful conclusion!
LMAO- shortcircuited!
Oh, goodness- i can't believe ANOTHER story is finished! You MUST start posting your next one ASAP.
preferably the sequel to The Beckoning, though I am sure I will be happy with anything that you write that features our favorite duracell.
Great job, mellon nin! |
 HarryEstel 2004-09-21 . chapter 5Thanks for posting fast! That was incredible! I loved every single moment of this. Please keep up the excellent work! I look forward to seeing more of your stuff in the very near future! |
 Deep Sorrow 2004-09-21 . chapter 5Oh, cool ending. Very nifty little story, thank you so miych for sharing! |
 Deana 2004-09-21 . chapter 5That was an awesome story! I loved it! It was so original, so filled with suspense! GREAT job! WOO HOO! ;) |
 sielge 2004-09-21 . chapter 5 WOW! I liked this chapter very much! And the end... it's full of questions. That single butterfly... |
 lorderita 2004-09-21 . chapter 4I just finished reading this story and may I say that I liked it a lot? I know that you must hear this several times but I loved it. It feels very fantasy-like and actually very in-character and in-lord style. I kept on thinking about that one scene with Frodo and Galadriel in The Return Of The King, during the scenes with Shelob. Okay, that must sound weird. Anyhow, I liked it! Good work, keep it up. |