Liked the second story better

LOL kurgan in pink!

Aislynn Crowdaughter:

‚You do realize that the Horsemen are older, not younger, than the Kurgan?’

yes, why? Is there a mistake in it?

‘I do not tghink that Methos is after Duncans head. If so, there would have been no problem for him to take him whhen Duncan was under the evil Qickening. He could have done it right after Duncan had taken Sean Burns. But instead, Methos did weverything in his power to bring Duncan back. He also could have taken him when Duncan offered his head to him after he killed Richie in "Archangel". But Methos answer was "Absolutely NOT!" Anyway, since this is Duncans dream it says more about Duncan anyway, than Methos.’

You are right; but a dream is not about thinking rational, it’s more subconsciously. In ‘Not To Be’(I don’t know if that is the correct title, we have other titles here) he 'dreams' about an evil Methos

Hi! I do not tghink that Methos is after Duncans head. If so, there would have been no problem for him to take him whhen Duncan was under the evil Qickening. He could have done it right after Duncan had taken Sean Burns. But instead, Methos did weverything in his power to bring Duncan back. He also could have taken him when Duncan offered his head to him after he killed Richie in "Archangel". But Methos answer was "Absolutely NOT!" Anyway, since this is Duncans dream it says more about Duncan anyway, than Methos.

The used images are nice, though.

Aislynn

Hi.

You do realize that the Horsemen are older, not younger, than the Kurgan?

Just asking.

greetings,

Aislynn

Really nice story. The thought of Kurgan and Pink is just too much to bear! I really liked the Four Horsemen (my favorite villians/antihero) as vicious little kids. I'm still laughing!

Duncan's nightmare was interesting to me...he did sort of have times where he felt like nothing he did really changed anything and in your story the nightmare really accentuates that fear. Bravo!

Cool stories, but you see I think the scariest nightmare is Kurgan's nightmare, to be called "Uncle Kurgan" by MacLeod is just too horrible to this poor psychopath.

Anyway, I like Methos' behavior in the second part, I just like him when he is Death.

Continue writing fics about Methos !

Carine

Well, I'd be lying like a dog if I said I didn't find the first chapter funny. I take that back, it was funnier than hell. the Kurgan getting his behind kicked by five little kids who can't stop fighting with each other, HYSTERICAL! As for the second chapter, I'd also be lying if I said it didn't bother me near as much as I figured. Both are very good, is there more? Or do you leave us hanging at that? I sure hope it's not the latter.

Neoinean, thank you very much for your kind (and detailed) review, and for volunteering to beat-read my future stories (I will e-mail it to you as soon as I finish another story/ chapter, but I don’t know when this will be; I haven’t planned another story yet).

I have written two Methos nightmares already in my other fic ‘DEATH’S revenge’, maybe you will check it out? The rating is R, so you have to click the button ‘All Genres’ or ‘R’ for it (apparently G- PG-13 is standard).

Very interesting. The Kugan's nightmare seemed very fitting. I wonder if he ever met the horsemen, or Duncan for that matter. The sense that I got was that he was trying to be the most evil badguy on the face of the earth, but he doesn't measure up to the horsemen. Also that his fight with Connor, while seeming epic at the time, was nothing like Duncan facing off against the horsemen. Sort of like the Kurgan's mind telling him that in all things, he remains second best.

Duncan's dream was frightening. It seemed to convey his deepest fears: that Methos will turn evil, and that he has Kronos's evil inside of him (because of the dark quickening he is well aware of the less-than-perfect hold he has on the evils inside of him). Very well done on both parts. Any more dreams ahead? Methos's perhaps?

I had no problems understanding what you were trying to say. You have a wonderful comprehension of English spelling and grammar. The only issues you had were with phrasing and word choice, and that's entirely understandable. If you want a beta for future fics then email me and I would be happy to help.