This story was very emotional and very good.

wow beautiful! Made me go all gooey inside whe! Loved this, you should write more Colloyd. ^^

There is hope for this fandom! Thank you, thank you, THANK YOU!

So sweet. And fuzzy, and spontaneous! Hee. I absolutley love this fic. *Faves!*

The only problem I saw was two minor gramatical errors. Also, Raine's role at the end struck myself and some people I showed this to as slightly un-Raine-like. Maybe she was too cranky, or it was the words she used, but it just struck us as a little odd.

But... Hee. I love this fic. ^_^

Yeah, you know you enjoyed kissing Lloyd. :P
Lovely story, honestly. Write some more

*laughs* Raine is so funny.
You know, I really, really like your one shots. Everything is so complete and yet you know there's more. I've been told that that's the sign of a brilliant short story. And that my friend, was just that.
~Perfect Soldier 01

PS: I'm not sure whether my review actually came through for the last one I read. This little review box didn't do what it was meant to. So sorry if you end up with three identical reviews! XD

Wow. You really know how to write a Lloyd/Colette fic.

Yeah! That was good! I think it's always very important to set the mood which you did with the night and the full moon. I also think it's important to describe what they are thinking and feeling, which you did really well. All around, a good story!

Omg! That was so cute! No cute doesn't describe it! I love it!

LOL! Even though they were whispering everyone heard! Should of seen that one coming...

Wow. That was really stupendous!!
I can tell from just this one chapter that you are a splendid writer. PLease keep at it!!
Fabulous work.

Very nice. It was really adorable; I love how you wrote Lloyd and Colette - awesome characterization.

Oh, and a slight peeve: "LLOYD! COLETTE! IF YOU'RE DONE KISSING, COULD YOU COME BACK TO BED? IT'S REALLY LATE AND YOU GUYS ARE GOING TO BE TIRED TOMORROW!" Typing in caps sorta... weakens the feel of the fic. Next time, try italics; it looks a lot more professionel then writing in all caps. ^^;

Keep writing!

Nothing less than Id expect from you. A great story, espessially the end:)

Yes I did enjoy it! =)

That was very cute! I especially liked everyone's reactions at the end!

Is this going to be a one-shot?

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A Colloyd ficcy! WOOHOO!
Me likes very much, heehee