funny funny funny! I love this pairing and you got the presonalities right on the dot! the only thing is that I a kyoru fan, I despise yukiru, but then again it wasn't really implied. keep up the good work!
~crystal
the one and only

^^ Nice story. Like the ending, about Shi's publisher. So true, hehe.

Thank you for not going hard lemon on me. Sometimes that gets creepy. So I really liked the story and I'm hoping maybe for a sequel. :)

WOW that was really good!!...I loved that story!! yay for you !

Aw, I love pairings within the Mabudachi Trio. It's so very cuute. ^^

Really really cute! I wasn't sure what else to say but I really don't know what else to say, but I didn't want to send you a review with jsut that one line- nevermind. >< *sighs* It was a really nice and lighthearted story to read. ^^

"He's got that magical effect on me."

he's got that effect on all of us ^^;

ah, poor innocent Tohru... at least Yuki is there to ward off Ayame's innuendo :D

cheers,
lin.

this is very nice indeed!i like it =) hey, maybe you can check out some of my stuff @ fictionpress too! > w.fictionpress.com/~rin0a < thanks a lot! ~much luv~Kaye

Ha..very nice! The title was very clever by the way. haha Anyways, I have just skimmed through it. I wanted to be the first reviewer, Yes, silly me. Those do sound like things our dear Ayame would say. I like the little game thing he wanted to teach Thoru to play with Yuki. You also divided the sections which I like since I do not like to much detail. Just right!

kyoru forever! please go on, this is good! ^_^ :)