 hilaryxkai1234 2007-02-08 . chapter 3yet another great story cant wait for the next chapter |
 Noaku-The-Fire-Angel 2006-07-14 . chapter 3really cute
mariam & ozuma: we will not get married!
me: how do know you two could be bethrothed
mariam & ozuma: *look at each other and run off*
tyson: where did they go?
me: to their vilage to talk to the elders
tyson: oh
me: please continue |
 Bluestray 2005-12-17 . chapter 3good story plz update! |
 It's all good 2005-09-02 . chapter 3 Wow this is a great fan fic.. Please continue as son as possible
P.s not gay |
 Dave 2005-06-22 . chapter 3 Herumph :( R U ever goin to review |
 lily-the-fox 2005-06-06 . chapter 1Buwahahahhahaha~ Here's number 3~
^O^ So >3 You *are* gonna convert the pairing to Mariah and *Tala* still right?
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 Mr.X 2005-05-23 . chapter 3 Can u please review soon please I really wanna know how the cupples get to geather |
 Mo the Dude 2005-05-18 . chapter 3 huma,
i read this fic a few days ago but havent had the chance 2 post some comments.
joking aside, this is one AMAZING fic. and i know amazing, ive been a bookworm since i was 8 years old, i know quality when i see it.
you were really brave to write about such topics and you wrote about them with flair, realism and originality. you actually made me begin to care about what happened to the charachters.
all in al this was an EXCELLENT piece of work, thank you for sharing it with me.
much love
HMX4E |
 Mo the Dude 2005-05-18 . chapter 2 "Hey it's not Ria's fault if you have animalistic instincts you know," Emily chided, always ready to ruffle Julia up.
"Whatever geek face!"
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meOW! ud think for a buncha girls who just got out the loony can theyd behave better, since they spent a whole year practicin! |
 Mo the Dude 2005-05-18 . chapter 1 wow...thats...some dark story huma.
kind of reminds me of my OWN childhood, they used to lock me in a cage and poke me with a STICK!
i was only fed a bucket of fish heads once a month!
where was MY asylum huh? i was just told to "stop being such a drama queen, finish your toast and go to school" by my parents
did i DESERVE such abuse? DID I? |
 SailorofTears 2005-05-11 . chapter 3TALA AND MARIAH or MYSTEL AND MARIAH! Rei/Mariah is soo old and cliche...let's get her with some odd couples..but hot couples!! woohoo! i didnt think this chapter was crap, it was really good, at least i thought it was! But keep writing!! YOU NEED TO UPDATE, but no pressure. dont rush, take your time..PLEASE DOO!
gotta go! see ya
~Sherry~ |
 SailorofTears 2005-05-11 . chapter 2Wonderful speech Judy gave...Made me remeber when I left Summer Camp, and our counselor was saying goodbye to all of us and i had to say goodbye to the guy i liked for a month and a half. i was so sad!! But anyways! great chapter yet again!! but who asked if they needed a ride! well, i'm gonna read the next chapter!! see ya in a few!
ciao! |
 SailorofTears 2005-05-11 . chapter 1Great! Awesome chapter! These girls sound fabolous.. and I love how you started out with it and I also noticed that you were really sneaky with advertising your fics in "Tempted Fate", well done! hahahaha! loved it! keep writing..but i have a few questions. What is:
OCD?? and
Epilepsy?? |
 Tai-for-you 2005-05-04 . chapter 3omg! I love it! u describe each person perfectly, plz update! |
 Mr.X 2005-04-23 . chapter 3 hey you continued. thanks for thinking of the little people it got kind of confusing at the end. Was It
Tyson and Hiro. i know taeko is tysons real name.
I was just confused I thought they would remember Tyson. So could you continue dis story so I would be
At a end of my confusion.
Thanks |