Cool. This is the best and the only fic about Jonah I've read. And I'm hard to impress, so that's a big compliment. Oh, who am I kidding? I'm really easy to impress, but I read some of your other poems and those are deep, too. So good Job. (Get it? It's a pun. Ya know, the book of Job? From the Bible? Oh, never mind...)

I just found a link here from ... was it Villainny's lj? I don't know. In any case, I read your Jonah poem, and read it again, and stared and stared. So beautiful. I like the jutting bones, and the pink-haddock-faced children, and the ending that really tells us who this Jonah is and why he acts, and the beginning, and yeah. Brilliant.