hey great chapter

this is awesome! Keep it going
( though all full blooded saiyans have black hair)

Hey, this is good, you're far too modest. I wonder if Ryoko is as strong as Washu says she is or if she's underestimating the sayains, like the Supreme Kai...I guess Goku and Vegeta could fuse. But that usually makes things worse :D Anyway I like it!

hey is this story still been updated?
pretty good adaptation so far and well-written

Welcome back. ^_^ Wow. This is most unfortunate that people don't apreaciate some writing. I'd call this a true fan fic, because it's original. ::sigh:: :shake head:: Crossovers are hard to do. Even when you know everything about the characters. You kind of have to make them your own (which some people consider as wrecking the characters), but if you look at any fan fiction, no character is exactly the same as the original. ::wacks random people:: Read this story or I'll send Seiryuu, Suzaku, Byakko and Genbu and their 28 seishi, (names all 28 people, see the novel, "The Universe of the Four Gods.") after you. ::Death glare at people::
My only advice would be, combine some of your chapters, and when the POV changes use *'s or +'s or ='s or something. It'll make the story shorted and make it look like more reviews per chapter. ^_^ I hope this helps.

Hmm. The story has been up for some 11 days with nary a review?

You might wanna rethink the concept of merging Tenchi with such a hyper-popular/GREATEST SHOT EVAH a DB. Especially GT since it's suppose to be the more assier of the Dragon Balls.