i hope their is an upate soon this story is awesome

hey this is a great fic so far I hope you update this

Hi I'm thrilled that there is finally a fanfic with the character Eddie Kramer and Caroline Holden. Keep up the good work and thanks.

totally wkd

we both proboly have diffrent ideas of were we are going with them though. for example i was going to have Hiobie go and visit his relitives and maybe have one of them become a life guard.