Great Story! A little spelling error on "interlay" (I'm assuming it's s'posed to be "entirely"), but a professional would have an editor pick that up. And this _is_ good enough to be written by a professional.

I'd review, but this is just lamered up.

hahahahahahahahahah

cool! needa see another one... must read next part... (kyillir is a zombieeeeeee) hehehehehe

Yessss! Kari/T.K! Another one bite this catagory!Keep this up! I dare you!

If this is Kari/TK...Go for it! I love this fic!

Kewl! That sounds great... well, as long as Izzy and Kari are still friends. I like T.K. enough, I won't rant and rave... But Izzy and Kari must stay friends! Put T.K. and Kari together all you like, but Izzy muststay friends! O.O Please? I beg of you! Great job, BTW.

Who cares about Tk/kari, make a new couple. I'm sick of Tk/kari fics.

lilly talking here. Yay! a Tk and Kari. I love 'em. hey can review part three for I Am Alone, a little romance, um don't take it wrong, it's not a yuri,but please read and review. I want a Tk and Kari! don't make it a Izzy and Kari, I'm beggin' ya. well that's all bye!

GOOD, GOOD, GOOD! Sorry, hyper! ;o) *jumps up and down* Do I see something between Hikari and Koushiro? Interesting... I believe Takeru and Hikari make a better couple, but it's your story, do what you want! Oh, and now Takeru looks like Yamato? I like!

WRITE! WRITE MORE!

All: WHAT! IZZY AND KARI! never! I'm a major Tk and Kari fan but Izzy and Kari he's like 2 years older than her, come to think of it Joe is 3 three years older than Mimi, but... anyway! Why couldn't be Tk instead of Izzy?huh? huh? huh? We wanted it to be a Tk and Kari.*crys*

Finish this! It's great! and do I smell a Kari/Izzy? If so, whatever. this is COOL!

Awwwww... *sighs; vows to kill Kari for having Iz-san hugging her; plans to congradulate the author 'cause they put Izzy in a sappy moment* That was great... AWESOME JOB!

'twas beutiful... i loooooove this series! write mopre! moooooore!

that's cool