well that was fantastic

Sneaky Seto.

Lipgloss with coffee? Hm...Not bad, I guess.

that was so cute! i luvd it! it was
pretty funny too! keep up the great writing!

very nice keep going

Great story, but why would Seto love coffee so much? He has a company to run.

That was nice. "Battery?" That's very in character...I can see him saying something like that. Good job on this one. a bit shorter but still packs the full punch if you ask me. [grin]
Hope there's another one...[wink]

Ciao!

Cute! Seto is sneaky!

Ha ha ha ha ha...I like the dialogue and I like the couple. Good job!

Haha. This was good. I like the whole interaction between the two. It was sweet. I was wondering is this a one-shot?

M, lovely and very fluffy, but I just can't picture the couple. Odd pairing, considering the fact that Seto does his best to ignore everyone a part of the YGO gang. Oh, I guess people can never tell what's going on behind that placid expression of his...he's so good at hiding whatever his feelings are. *shrugs* Not that it's any of *my* business what the classy CEO does in his spare time...^_~ Well, just because I'm biased towards the pairing certainly doesn't mean that the writing was bad. Actually, it was a pleasure to read! Wonderful, fluid style of literature here. Though the plot wasn't developed, the dialogue between the characters seemed realistic and was entertaining. And you captured them both in-character, too! You never lost credibility, or my attention, and that makes this story worth more reviews than it has recieved. If you turned this into a full-length novel, I'd be there to read it...

Sweet and fluffy indeed. Which translates to 'enjoyable' and 'romantic', of course, in my dictionary. I especially loved the way you wrote their relationship; the way they acted around each other. It came acorss as both sweet and in-character, with Kaiba's edge softened by Anzu a little. ^-^