 music4mysoul 11/30/05 . chapter 14I liked that chapter, it kinda left me thinking if Jess can really stay in Stars Hollow for good just because of Rory. I loved it, please update soon! |
 heartfallen 11/26/05 . chapter 14This is the best Jess story I have ever read! Great job. Please update! |
 hayley 10/4/05 . chapter 14 this story is awesome. i really want rory and jess to end up together. i thought the introduction of amber was a little random, since...there was no amber in the show, lol. but i guess that's your creative prerogative as a writer. finish soon! |
 Jess 10/4/05 . chapter 14 Ah! I've read the new chapter now, but you're still mean! *cries* I don't want Amber to be mad a Jess... *pouts* You better fix that, Missy! Please?
But thank you so much for the dedication! All the dedications! *HUGS* |
 laci 4/15/05 . chapter 13 are you going to update. i want to see what happens. please update soon! |
 smile1 3/30/05 . chapter 13Hey,
This was such an intense and well written chapter. I loved how they didn't care about anything else and just wanted each other.
Bye, smile :-) |
 music4mysoul 3/30/05 . chapter 13This was a great chapter, please update soon! |
 music4mysoul 3/18/05 . chapter 12This chapter was so good, especially the part with the flying bird thing! Please update soon! |
 EMILY 2/19/05 . chapter 12 I NEED MORE NOW! SRY ABOUT CAPS KEYBORD IS SCREWY. I WANT...NO I NEED MORE! LOVE IT! |
 quieter-writer 2/5/05 . chapter 12Abomidale! Don't by any means quite your day job!
Adriane Grace |
 smile1 2/3/05 . chapter 12Hey,
Now this was a great chapter. I loved it. It was filled with drama and confrontation, but you managed to keep it in line which just added to the appeal and excellence of this chapter. I also love how you made it so clear how both Amber and Rory felt and how Jess kept a bit too himself in the background. I hope his feelings will shine through, too, and that Amber will eventually understand both where Jess and Rory is coming from. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Bye, smile :-) |
 SH 2/3/05 . chapter 12 Ah! For me? Ah! Thank you thank you thank you! *hugsKMtightly* I love Amber even more now! *hugsAmber* Just poor Jess for being crippled by Dean (*kicksDean*) and poor Amber for not being loved by the man she loves, Jess. *sighs* That's just so sad! I tell you. You gotta do a Jess/Amber story. Please? *puppydogeyes* LOL |
 me 12/22/04 . chapter 11 update soon i love it.. |
 lora 12/15/04 . chapter 11 yay u updated i!this is really good update soon and omg let rory and jess get back together i dont no how many times iv reviewed this i think ive revbiewed like every chapter but i say like the same thing in everyone i think i dont no but i hate dean hes so like i dont no hes weird i dont like hime! |
 Helle18 12/13/04 . chapter 11Mel!
I haven't read this story before, but I just did, and WOW! It's great. I love it.
I love that Jess have gotten out of the big drug mess and that Jimmy was a great guy and that Amber exists, and that Jess and Rory kissed.
I'm sorry that Jess once again had to go get himself in a mess beating up Dean, but the way you write it, I can feel his pain and it's understandable I guess. I hope you keep writing 'cause I'd love to see how Jess gets himself out of this one. I also hope Rory comes to her senses soon and make Jess a happy man again, although it's seems to be some time away considering the last event.
Um, long sucky review but... yeah. Great work, keep it up!
/Helena |