Okay. Your 'Rita' is so blatantly a self-insert. And Mitsui's the one who goes to her. What sh*t. Your fic's cliched, plotless, nauseatingly Mary-Sue -- yeah, all that. You should have deleted this 4 years ago. Now, instead of aging like fine wine as other stories would have aged, your story's decomposed like a slice of wet bread kept on the kitchen countertop.

Do educators a favor and resort to reading fundamental grammar books. As for your title, Fates of Destiny...m. What about the Fortune of Good Luck, or Badness of Being Mean, or Stupidity of Foolishness? And spare some psychiatrist the meanness of letting them cure your delusion. Naming mary sue after yourself is pathetic even for a 2 year old. Don't be just another moron

hm... some characters are from rave... ayt?keep on updating...

ok.this story is getting more weird by the second, aren't mitsui ans the other guys in college? how can they still be in high school again? this is confusing me a lot.

way cool~~ haha.. slam dunk ppl and her own friends ... this would definately be a good fanfic!! LOVE UR STORIES FOREVA ^_~

Hey...let me be your first reviewer for this!!I'm so happy you decided to have a sequel, and about Mitsui and Rita too. Update soon, I can't wait for more.