   Kitty Caesar 7/6/09 . chapter 3LOL! This chapter was great! XD Studying? Yeah, right! Moki-alarm-clock? Yeah! XD |
| AlchemistLynn 3/31/09 . chapter 3 That, was so cute! I loved it. |
| FireKai 12/4/08 . chapter 3 Great story! Mokuba is the best alarm clock Seto could have. Joey should spend more nights at Seto's house, for his own good: he would be with Seto and he wouldn't be late for school. What more could he want? Anyway, as I already said, great story! |
| Chibi Carru 3/13/08 . chapter 3 Hah. Mokuba. Silly kid. hahha |
| Chibi Carru 3/13/08 . chapter 1 thats so cute. "hes the only one i want."
Aww...If only straight guys can be like Joey hahaha. |
| kaixjouaddict 10/25/07 . chapter 3 Oh goodness! That was just so freaking adorable_ |
| Cagholino 8/30/07 . chapter 3 That so cute.I love the ending with mokuba wanking them up.Funny.Great job i love it.5 out of 5. |
| Yuki Valons 1/7/07 . chapter 3 Lol! Mokuba is just too cute |
| Sour Schuyler 10/20/05 . chapter 3 Lol! That's so great. I really didn't expect Mokuba to have any major part. _ But he was awfully cute and tenacious, the way you described him. _
I like how you started each chapter out with the same subject-describing a kiss-but managed to make it different each time.
I also loved this part: Joey wondered how such a perfectly innocent sentence could sound so terribly suggestive coming from Mokuba.
Anyway, so, yeah. Glad I read it! |
| Sour Schuyler 10/20/05 . chapter 2 - I love how you are only showing this from Joey's point of view, and not Seto's. Keeping it in the 3rd person limited means that what Seto's planning is a surprise. And I can't wait. |
| Sour Schuyler 10/20/05 . chapter 1 You reached THREE HUNDRED stories? When! o.0 Anyway, this one caught my attention, seeing as it was Joey/Seto, didn't seem too hentai from the summary, and was longer than a chapter. And its well-written as well! This chapter really set everything up for whatever's coming next. And Yugi being concerned for Joey is kawaii. - |
| Ele Goddess of Elements 10/15/05 . chapter 3 LMFAO! omg, that wuz hilarious! i luved it!
Ele-chan |
| Shuffle Queen 4/4/05 . chapter 3 I really REALLY liked the last exchange...*dies laughing* You are so talented...there've only been a few times where I've been so jealous of someone's writing ability...gods, you're amazing!
Shuffle Queen |
| Aisho Ren 4/1/05 . chapter 3 Awe
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That was SO Kawii! |
| DaylightStarr 1/25/05 . chapter 3 Cute, very, very cute. I loved this story. I'm starting to become more of a S/J shipper every fanfic I read. This one really set me over, in a wonderful way, of course. Thank you for sharing. _ |
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