i really like this story and its twists and turns.
Eyghon Fr 12/22/04 . chapter 16
Holy S ! That was... wow !
You'd better hurry with a sequel cuz I'm gonna go crazy guessing things on my own in my head...
I don't know if you already know what you're gonna do, but the obvious would be Lauren, but if we want to go with crazy hypothesis, it could be a lot of other people... but Lauren's fine with me, the best choice actually, I'm just surprised that she would hurt Syd like that. I mean, Lauren loves Syd like CRAZY, I don't know what would be her limits. Getting rid of the concurence is the first step... but it's kinda harsh there... I am impatient to see how you're gonna explain that murder...
or is it just supposed to look like its gonna start all over again?
Eyghon 12/22/04 . chapter 15
Maybe she's not her normal self or maybe... well, there could be hundred of reasons, but I'm really impatient to see what you choose.
That chapter was great, the way Zac obtained the info, it's better than just reading a file or something. If Syd made a friend, it means something, that she's not crazy Julia anymore for sure... or so I think.
Anyway, I can't seem to get enough of that fic, keep the updates coming, this is great !
Eyghon 12/21/04 . chapter 14
It's a dream coming true : more than 1 update a day ! lol.
Loved that chapter, I don't know for you, but S/V is so boring sometimes, here there is actions and more choices than Weiss, Will or Sark.
I'm confused though, how come Jack seems to know what Elliott is talking about ?
Eyghon fr 12/21/04 . chapter 13
Poor Vaughn, I almost pity him... almost.
Loved Syd kissing Lauren just in front of him, couldn't have been better !
funny, "you two look after each other" !
Syd is really confused, I loved the insight from her mind in the end of the chapter, it seems very realistic. Her backing down, then cuddling... she's confused and you're doing a great job showing it.
Sorry if my praise... er, damn words... "te donnent la grosse tete", but really, I mean it, this is amazing !
That was incredible, awesome, amazing, crazy, wonderful, excellent...
waho !
I could never have imagined such a fanfic, and what she did to Elle... You're an amazing writer ! Please, tell me you're planning an update before the new year ?