Wow, I really loved this story. A lot of the Mulan fics just don't keep the characters IC, but this one was fantastic! I loved how Shang was freaking out when he thought he might be in love with a man! Hahaha XD NICE. Anyway, I can't wait for the sequel; keep up the good work! ^^

Aw poor Shang...it's alright sweetie, you're straight! You are just in love with a cross-dresser! :DD lol anyway I love this fic, it's doing a great job of mixing in Shang's introspective and also being sweetly romantic. You write very well and this is a great fic!

Very nice! I like how he doubts his sexuality in the beginning, and how it doesn't have any of the "inner theaters" of the male mind. All in All very nice story.

I ran across this one awhile ago and I really liked it. Now, I'll be coming back as often as I can.

Though, it would've been more interesting if Mulan actually was who everyone thinks she is.

(laughs)

I cant' believe that it took me this long to find this story it was very nice, I really enjoyed it

THANKS:D

Nice story. We get a look into Shang's thoughts and find that he is, indeed, quite perceptive.

NC

Um...just to let you know:

prey: animals that predators hunt
pray: to request of spiritual beings

I loved it! so much FLUFF!

Awesome way to end a story! I can't exactly remember if I already reviewed your story before... but I'll just review it again! =] You did an awesome job with Shang's feelings!

I love how you describe Shang's confused feelings towards this "odd little young boy." This is such a nice short story! Keep it up!

I like how you sorta added some words from the lyrics of that song playing during the movie. The "Pack up, GO HOME, YOU'RE THROUGH" part. Very smart. =]

That was really good, a nice twist on an already good story. I can't wait to read sequel...I really can't *goes to read it*

Hi. I hope you write the sequel soon.

Yay! Sequel's soon I hope.

Simple yet beautiful story, I would love to see a sequel.